Topsy ~ Turvy
And ready to lose it31 total reviews
Comment from NanaGaye
Love it Love it. Perfect rhyming and I like the text you chose,and of course the humor. I'm about to dream up something for dinner. We are just going into our winter
All the best NanaGaye
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Love it Love it. Perfect rhyming and I like the text you chose,and of course the humor. I'm about to dream up something for dinner. We are just going into our winter
All the best NanaGaye
Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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HeySweetie, so good to see you and i'm glad you liked my topsy-turvy poem. It was a lot of fun to write. So you are going into Winter already and here we're just starting summer. That seems really strange. Thank you for the lovely review and kind words. Also thank you for the six stars. You are always so sweet and I always appreciate you. Love, Debi.
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Thanks Love & best wishes
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Congratulations on the contest win, Debi and well deserved with this fun read about this playful kitty. I liked the internal rhyme lines, they work well. Nicely done,
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Congratulations on the contest win, Debi and well deserved with this fun read about this playful kitty. I liked the internal rhyme lines, they work well. Nicely done,
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Hi Valda,Thank you so very much for the fun review and comments for this silly poem. It was a fun one to write. Thanks again for the congrats too, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Monica Chaddick
This was so cute! I absolutely adore the picture that you selected to go with your poem. The colors chosen worked well, as did the font. Great job, which is no surprise when it comes to your work, my dear beloved friend.
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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This was so cute! I absolutely adore the picture that you selected to go with your poem. The colors chosen worked well, as did the font. Great job, which is no surprise when it comes to your work, my dear beloved friend.
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Hi Monica, you are so sweet. Thank you so very much for the fun review and comments for this silly poem. I am honored by your six stars.
This was a fun one to write. Thanks again my dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from GoWiSt
And she wins again. Congrats, Debi.
Ha! Humorously apt complementary picture art choice.
"And I'm about to lose my lunch" Ha! Clench those teeth.
"I think my bottom's lost in space" Oh, do get it back; it's one of our favorite parts of you.
Very good not just end rhymes, but intra-line ones as well. Very well done.
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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And she wins again. Congrats, Debi.
Ha! Humorously apt complementary picture art choice.
"And I'm about to lose my lunch" Ha! Clench those teeth.
"I think my bottom's lost in space" Oh, do get it back; it's one of our favorite parts of you.
Very good not just end rhymes, but intra-line ones as well. Very well done.
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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GoWiSt, do you have a name I could call you, or do you not give that out?
You are so funny, but so very kind. Thank you so very much for the fun review and comments for this silly poem. It was a fun one to write.
Thanks again my dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from LJbutterfly
Where did you ever find such a hilarious picture. It fits your hilarious poem perfectly. Each stanza describes the feelings of a poor, confused cat in distress, waiting to get off of his upside down carnival ride. Very creative. Congrats on your well deserved win.
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Where did you ever find such a hilarious picture. It fits your hilarious poem perfectly. Each stanza describes the feelings of a poor, confused cat in distress, waiting to get off of his upside down carnival ride. Very creative. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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you are so sweet. I found the picture on Pinterest. I have an account there and if you ever want me to get you something, please let me know.
Thank you so very much for the fun review and comments for this silly poem. It was a fun one to write. Thanks again my very dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Jill D
Welcome to my world Debi.. Your poem sounds like every Monday morning for me.. I get myself rearranged by Tuesday though;) I enjoyed this.. Good fun! Congrats on the win btw!
All the best.
Jill:)
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Welcome to my world Debi.. Your poem sounds like every Monday morning for me.. I get myself rearranged by Tuesday though;) I enjoyed this.. Good fun! Congrats on the win btw!
All the best.
Jill:)
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Haha! Jill, hope that means you are doing fine this morning.
thanks for the awesome review for this silly poem. I appreciate all the kind words.
Love, Debi
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Haha! Jill, hope that means you are doing fine this morning.
thanks for the awesome review for this silly poem. I appreciate all the kind words.
Love, Debi
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Darn, I must push that save button twice.
Must mean I am doubly thankful for your review. LOL
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Silly poems are mood boosters:))
Comment from cupa tea
lol, we have lots of cats and they are always funny like that. I loved your poem. It was right to the point, easy to follow and enjoyable. Made me laugh. good job!
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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lol, we have lots of cats and they are always funny like that. I loved your poem. It was right to the point, easy to follow and enjoyable. Made me laugh. good job!
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Dear Cupatea, love your name and thanks for the awesome review for this silly poem. I appreciate all the kind words.
Love, Debi
Comment from Dr. Nad
Ha ha ha! I get it, you know we've all been there. Those are days when it feels like things not only wrong. but unfixable. I love the rhyme scheme that you have used. I don't know if it's got a name or not, I don't know that I have seen it before. I just know it's extra challenging. I love how you always do it though Debi. I noticed that you won the contest. I'm not very good at knowing how to navigate with technology and stuff. On your portfolio concerning this poem my computer was going very slow so I hit it several times and I have four different congratulations. I tried to delete three I don't know how. Oh well.
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Ha ha ha! I get it, you know we've all been there. Those are days when it feels like things not only wrong. but unfixable. I love the rhyme scheme that you have used. I don't know if it's got a name or not, I don't know that I have seen it before. I just know it's extra challenging. I love how you always do it though Debi. I noticed that you won the contest. I'm not very good at knowing how to navigate with technology and stuff. On your portfolio concerning this poem my computer was going very slow so I hit it several times and I have four different congratulations. I tried to delete three I don't know how. Oh well.
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Hey, dear bro, you are so kind. And I love that you liked this one. It is a lot of fun to find new ways to write poems and do them different than normal. So it a lot of fun. Thanks too for the honor of your stars, dear one.
I owe you big time and will either show how much it means to me when you post or I do a poem for you. You will get the best one ever. (Smile) you are worth it, bro. Thank you again. Love, Debi
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You are most welcome for the review and stars. I believe you and Glen are home now. Where did you guys go for your anniversary, if you don't mind my asking?
Comment from jessizero
I can see why this piece won the contest! It was fun, and I liked your rhymes. You always write the most interesting poems. As always, thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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I can see why this piece won the contest! It was fun, and I liked your rhymes. You always write the most interesting poems. As always, thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Jessi, and you are always so sweet. And thanks for the awesome review for this silly poem. I appreciate all the kind words.
Love, Debi
Comment from nomi338
been there, felt that. When it comes and you just want to take a time out from all the madness. Find a place where you can scream your fool head off. Jump up and down, punch the air. In short, just go crazy. Trust me, you will soon feel better.
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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been there, felt that. When it comes and you just want to take a time out from all the madness. Find a place where you can scream your fool head off. Jump up and down, punch the air. In short, just go crazy. Trust me, you will soon feel better.
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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LOL, Nomi, if I could do all that, I'd never sit back down and write again.
Or else maybe I would have more to write about.
thanks for the awesome review for this silly poem. I appreciate all the kind words. Love ya, big bro! Debi
