Heart to Heart
Pressing issues.2 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Your heart is filled with distress about the state of the world, and understandably so. May I suggest you try to organise your thoughts into a more logical order and try to do away with any unnecessary repetition, to be more succcinct for the contest. Nevertheless sending you very best wishes.
Wendy
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Your heart is filled with distress about the state of the world, and understandably so. May I suggest you try to organise your thoughts into a more logical order and try to do away with any unnecessary repetition, to be more succcinct for the contest. Nevertheless sending you very best wishes.
Wendy
Comment Written 26-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Thank you! I will follow your advice.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was very creative. It's a perfect letter to God. It shares a longing for peace in the world. It's obvious giving current events that this is something many want! I think you share how troubled you are with the ongoing conflicts and disregard for life well. Your plea for a more compassionate and caring world is beautiful.
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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I thought this was very creative. It's a perfect letter to God. It shares a longing for peace in the world. It's obvious giving current events that this is something many want! I think you share how troubled you are with the ongoing conflicts and disregard for life well. Your plea for a more compassionate and caring world is beautiful.
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Thank you! I'm glad you think so.