Flipped
My whole world tipped when everything...8 total reviews
Comment from zanya
What a thoroughly enjoyable read with a great sense of fun and frolic in an upside down world where 'normality' seems to be taking a nap for the moment!
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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What a thoroughly enjoyable read with a great sense of fun and frolic in an upside down world where 'normality' seems to be taking a nap for the moment!
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Wow! Thank you for this fantastic 6 star review, it makes my night. :)
Comment from Jill D
This is clever and a fun read especially the part where your dog may have peed on you..Lol! Your poem put a smile on my face on a Monday morning!
All the best.
Jill:)
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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This is clever and a fun read especially the part where your dog may have peed on you..Lol! Your poem put a smile on my face on a Monday morning!
All the best.
Jill:)
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Thanks so much for the lovely 6 star review...it means so much to me. :)
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You're welcome:)
Comment from Andrea Kepple
I love how whimsical your poem is. Great job describing everything going on in the house with the cat and dog. I had an extra chuckle regarding the dog peeing on the narrator.
I love how you circled back to the pie and the eggs at the end of the poem along with the hope for things to get back to normal.
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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I love how whimsical your poem is. Great job describing everything going on in the house with the cat and dog. I had an extra chuckle regarding the dog peeing on the narrator.
I love how you circled back to the pie and the eggs at the end of the poem along with the hope for things to get back to normal.
Comment Written 26-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Thank you for this very nice review. :)
Comment from Bridge
I loved your little story. It made me laugh. The artwork matches perfectly. I found everything about your poem perfect. You have done a wonderful job. I wish you the very best in the contest.
With kind regards
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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I loved your little story. It made me laugh. The artwork matches perfectly. I found everything about your poem perfect. You have done a wonderful job. I wish you the very best in the contest.
With kind regards
Comment Written 26-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Thank you for this wonderful 6 star review! It makes my day. :)
Comment from Nathan Allen
This poem takes readers on a delightful journey through a topsy-turvy world. The playful language and imagery create a sense of wonder and amusement, as the speaker describes their upside-down house and the challenges of navigating it.
The poem's strength lies in its ability to evoke a sense of childhood imagination and wonder. The speaker's humorous observations about their predicament, like the cat chasing mice up walls and the mail spilling from the sky, will resonate with readers. It is a charming and entertaining poem that leaves the reader with a smile.
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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This poem takes readers on a delightful journey through a topsy-turvy world. The playful language and imagery create a sense of wonder and amusement, as the speaker describes their upside-down house and the challenges of navigating it.
The poem's strength lies in its ability to evoke a sense of childhood imagination and wonder. The speaker's humorous observations about their predicament, like the cat chasing mice up walls and the mail spilling from the sky, will resonate with readers. It is a charming and entertaining poem that leaves the reader with a smile.
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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This terrific 6 star review means the world to me. Thank you so much. :)
Comment from jessizero
I absolutely loved your rhymes in this poem! This was a fun piece on what would happen if your world flipped upside down. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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I absolutely loved your rhymes in this poem! This was a fun piece on what would happen if your world flipped upside down. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Thank you for this very nice review. :)
Comment from Sally Law
This is fun in every way and perfect for the upside poetry contest. My favorite :
I think I'll tie myself in bed,
hope I'll wake up to see...
That everything is right side up,
just like it used to be.
I'm still laughing! Just precious!
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes in the upcoming contest. Sally :))
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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This is fun in every way and perfect for the upside poetry contest. My favorite :
I think I'll tie myself in bed,
hope I'll wake up to see...
That everything is right side up,
just like it used to be.
I'm still laughing! Just precious!
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes in the upcoming contest. Sally :))
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Thank you so much for this great review, l appreciate it. :)
Comment from Julie Helms
This is a very funny poem. You paint the imagery perfectly. Not only is the house upside down, but the world is too. I definitely have days like that where all I can think is "is it me?"
The dog peeing on the unfortunate home owner got an out loud chuckle from me. :-)
Great entry for the prompt!
Julie
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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This is a very funny poem. You paint the imagery perfectly. Not only is the house upside down, but the world is too. I definitely have days like that where all I can think is "is it me?"
The dog peeing on the unfortunate home owner got an out loud chuckle from me. :-)
Great entry for the prompt!
Julie
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Thank you, that's very kind of you. I really appreciate this nice review. :)