Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

A very silly nonsense woman, and I enjoyed listening to it. It makes absolutely no sense, but I do know that there happens to be a condition with the eyes very rarely where a person sees things upside down. Patricia .

 Comment Written 24-May-2024

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reply by the author on 24-May-2024

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Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

You are such a kick. Even your notes are funny

A delightful read. I enjoyed it very much. You did a good job of conveying what an upside down topsy turvy world. When you are upside down you would still be on the floor not the ceiling. But, if the room was upside down you would be on the ceiling if you were also upside down

And, of course the sun always sets in the West. Your poem has it going down in the East. That was a good touch

If I had a six star rating left, I'd give one to you for your poem

I was just delighted and yes even chuckled.

Good luck in the contest thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 24-May-2024

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reply by the author on 24-May-2024

Thank you for reading and providing encouraging feedback.