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Debacle At Corinth

an unexpected admonishment

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Comment from Sallyo
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Of course not. We're human, not divine. Railing against that is like railing for adherence to the reviewing rules on FS: lots of angst and no cigar. Never mind. Your story actually IS worth its fiver. No errors, well written and a well-shaped story.

 Comment Written 24-May-2024

Comment from Julie Helms
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Ha! My pastor preached on this last Sunday. Hopefully the Corinthians altered their behavior, but human nature will not change on this side of eternity if left to its own.

A creative take on the prompt and well written.
Thanks for sharing!
Julie

 Comment Written 24-May-2024