Comment from tempeste

Exceptional

Ciao !

Damn it I pressed the wrong button. Fault of the world in reverse.

I wanted to give you my vote ( it would have been your 6 th) but instead it went to Upside Down which has three votes now.

I thought your entry was the best poem because you didn't waste time making a long list of things being awkwardly upside down.

You focused on telling us the universe and rules were inverse because gravity engaged reverse.

I love the rhyming.

And the artwork ..spiders often hang up side down.. c great choice.

So sorry I mucked up. (sigh)

 Comment Written 27-May-2024

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reply by the author on 27-May-2024

Thanks, tempeste. Votes are cheap, wise words make a real difference.

reply by tempeste on 29-May-2024

Glad you won the yellow ribbon! 🙂
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Comment from zanya

Excellent

This is a great entry for the Upside Down challenge, a fun look at the world in revers and with a superb rhyming sequence - it's a great pic to illustrate. zanya

 Comment Written 24-May-2024

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reply by the author on 24-May-2024

So kind, Zanya. Much appreciated.

Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

I think your poem is really well done. You not only matched the rhyme scheme but added internal rhymes. It's catchy and well metered! (That's a black widow, isn't it?)
Julie

 Comment Written 24-May-2024

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reply by the author on 24-May-2024

Thank you, Julie. I bow to your superior knowledge. Cheers!