2024 Gypsy's Prose
Viewing comments for Prologue "How to Write Haiku".
11 total reviews
Comment from BermyBye50
Gypsy Blue Rose,
Congrats on winning the Teach Me Something Contest. this is a perfect entry for the contest. It is cultural, historical, educational and a comprehensive explanation of a Haiku and its origin. You are the expert in Japanese poetry here on Fanstory and this is an excellent example of your knowledge and understanding of the Japanese Haiku poetry form.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Gypsy Blue Rose,
Congrats on winning the Teach Me Something Contest. this is a perfect entry for the contest. It is cultural, historical, educational and a comprehensive explanation of a Haiku and its origin. You are the expert in Japanese poetry here on Fanstory and this is an excellent example of your knowledge and understanding of the Japanese Haiku poetry form.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 01-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Congratulations on your contest win for this piece. Very interesting and informative for those of us who are fairly new to Haiku but want to learn to write it in the proper way. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Congratulations on your contest win for this piece. Very interesting and informative for those of us who are fairly new to Haiku but want to learn to write it in the proper way. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Thank you very much (*÷*)
Gypsy
Comment from Ric Myworld
Thanks for sharing your detailed knowledge that lets even a strictly prose guy understand the intricacies of haiku and it's differences from 5-7-5. Outstanding post. And congratulations on your very deserved contest win!
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Thanks for sharing your detailed knowledge that lets even a strictly prose guy understand the intricacies of haiku and it's differences from 5-7-5. Outstanding post. And congratulations on your very deserved contest win!
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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thank you very much 😊 Ric, I appreciate it.
gypsy
Comment from Tina Crute
The wealth of specific helpful information here is a gift. Thanks for sharing this. I especially like the plain, spaced format as it was easy to see and read a large amount of information.
Well done! Congratulations!
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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The wealth of specific helpful information here is a gift. Thanks for sharing this. I especially like the plain, spaced format as it was easy to see and read a large amount of information.
Well done! Congratulations!
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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thank you very much 😊
gypsy
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Welcome. It really did teach me:)
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Thank you, I'm happy you found it helpful 😊
Comment from tempeste
Ciao ! You now have 9 votes.
I love the 5-7-5 format or less because I love the challenge to say something of significance in very few syllables.
I found your entry instructive and will check out the links provided.
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Ciao ! You now have 9 votes.
I love the 5-7-5 format or less because I love the challenge to say something of significance in very few syllables.
I found your entry instructive and will check out the links provided.
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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thank you very much 😊 ciao
gypsy
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You are welcome!😊
Comment from jessizero
Your "teach me something" post was very informative indeed! I have come to the conclusion that I will never be able to write a true haiku. :)
Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Your "teach me something" post was very informative indeed! I have come to the conclusion that I will never be able to write a true haiku. :)
Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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oh no... haiku is a beautiful form, don't give up.
Thank you very much 😊
May you have a wonderful weekend
Comment from Thesis
Thanks for posting this. It was a very good lesson on how to write Haiku poetry. You included historical aspects, identified the differences between Japanese and American Haiku, and provided examples of the differences. Thank you.
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Thanks for posting this. It was a very good lesson on how to write Haiku poetry. You included historical aspects, identified the differences between Japanese and American Haiku, and provided examples of the differences. Thank you.
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Thank you very much, I'm glad you found it helpful.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I thought this was a blind contest? We appreciate the lesson on how to write the Haiku from someone who only writes Haiku and I shall keep this post for future reference. A very helpful lesson Gypsy, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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I thought this was a blind contest? We appreciate the lesson on how to write the Haiku from someone who only writes Haiku and I shall keep this post for future reference. A very helpful lesson Gypsy, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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I don't only write haiku.
Thank you very much, dolly
Comment from Pamusart
Hi. I have written dozens of haiku's, then probably 10 or so Sankus I was loosely aware of their requirements. But you have given a lot more information here which I appreciate because I might write some in the future.
Think you have written a wonderful article. Maybe you should follow it up with teaching Senku. I know the difference between a haiku and a senku. I think senku Is more about the material world than the ethereal world of nature
Good luck in the contest
Great job thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Hi. I have written dozens of haiku's, then probably 10 or so Sankus I was loosely aware of their requirements. But you have given a lot more information here which I appreciate because I might write some in the future.
Think you have written a wonderful article. Maybe you should follow it up with teaching Senku. I know the difference between a haiku and a senku. I think senku Is more about the material world than the ethereal world of nature
Good luck in the contest
Great job thank you for sharing
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Thank you very much, pamusart.
I don't know anything about sanku so I won't teach it but thank you, I will check it out.
Comment from Julie Helms
This very clearly explained and I think an important article for Fanstory where the 575 and haiku do seem to get used interchangeably. You show clearly the differences.
Thank you!
Julie
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reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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This very clearly explained and I think an important article for Fanstory where the 575 and haiku do seem to get used interchangeably. You show clearly the differences.
Thank you!
Julie
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Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Julie 😊
