Phil's Mail Surprise
Phil is about to get a surprise.3 total reviews
Comment from Mk Flood
i reckon he will have to get back on line to order some dog food..lol nice story that kept my interest till the end. i do thank you for selecting my work to be included with yours. it does work togther. still nice job on the story and good job overall.
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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i reckon he will have to get back on line to order some dog food..lol nice story that kept my interest till the end. i do thank you for selecting my work to be included with yours. it does work togther. still nice job on the story and good job overall.
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Thank you and you're welcome!
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Comment from jessizero
Yes, that would definitely be a huge surprise! I liked your descriptions, though I wonder why you chose to describe the man in detail but you didn't describe the puppy. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Yes, that would definitely be a huge surprise! I liked your descriptions, though I wonder why you chose to describe the man in detail but you didn't describe the puppy. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Thank you! The puppy supposed to be a surprise. I'm glad you enjoyed my story!
Comment from Begin Again
Oh my! Puppies are cute but I don't think I would want one delivered as a surprise especially if I didn't know what was coming. Great job!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Oh my! Puppies are cute but I don't think I would want one delivered as a surprise especially if I didn't know what was coming. Great job!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Thank you so much!