Another Chapter
The story doesn't end till the last line.16 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
How very wonderful. Men never seem to outgrow stupidity. And,a lot of us grow up way too soon. I came by before and could only get your editing section on your temptation poem. Odd that. Now it all works. Karen
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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How very wonderful. Men never seem to outgrow stupidity. And,a lot of us grow up way too soon. I came by before and could only get your editing section on your temptation poem. Odd that. Now it all works. Karen
Comment Written 25-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thanks for reading my little flash. I appreciate it very much. Hope you get your new home soon.
Smiles, Carol
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Comment from Bill Schott
This flash fiction story, Another Chapter, brings a tearful situation through its moment of turmoil and finds that the world is made right again by the end of the tale. Nice.
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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This flash fiction story, Another Chapter, brings a tearful situation through its moment of turmoil and finds that the world is made right again by the end of the tale. Nice.
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Sometimes we learn before it's too late that the grass isn't greener on the other side of the fence. I like happy endings so I am glad that the next chapter is filled with hope.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is a lovely outcome! I don't know if the image is of your parents but they certainly look very happy. But, whatever the case, this reconciliation will be a huge relief to your family, I'm sure. It must be very painful to see your parents falling out of love but, conversely, edifying to see them fall back again. Inspiring and a great entry. Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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This is a lovely outcome! I don't know if the image is of your parents but they certainly look very happy. But, whatever the case, this reconciliation will be a huge relief to your family, I'm sure. It must be very painful to see your parents falling out of love but, conversely, edifying to see them fall back again. Inspiring and a great entry. Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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The image is not my parents but I thought they looked so endearing. I appreciate the review and your comments. It was a fun write even if I didn't come close to winning. That's life! Smiles to you as always, Carol
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Special Delivery writing prompt. Awwww I loved this sweet story and it isn't far-fetched because i know a couple that it happened to. It's never too late to realize you were wrong. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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An excellent entry for the Special Delivery writing prompt. Awwww I loved this sweet story and it isn't far-fetched because i know a couple that it happened to. It's never too late to realize you were wrong. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Bravo! Thank you Marilyn for understanding and being able to relate that the grass isn't always greener on the other side of the fence. If you make a mistake, maybe it can be fixed/
Have a great day!
Comment from Ric Myworld
Sometimes, a little break can make all the difference in the world. But only if the jilted wife can forgive and forget the transgression committed against her. :-) Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Sometimes, a little break can make all the difference in the world. But only if the jilted wife can forgive and forget the transgression committed against her. :-) Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Forgiveness is one of the biggest band-aids in our lifetime. Sometimes, it's the magic cure, and other times, it just won't stick. Often, the olive branch gets snapped in half, leaving the person needing a glass of wine. But if it works, life is good. Have a great day!
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What a real and fantastic reply. Now I think I'll have one of glasses of wine. :-)
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Smiles! And enjoy!
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Awww, what a sweet tale!! Mom and dad get back together after trying being apart and finding love was really back where they left it. Thanks for sharing the story,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Awww, what a sweet tale!! Mom and dad get back together after trying being apart and finding love was really back where they left it. Thanks for sharing the story,
Rhonda
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Thanks, Rhonda. Everything is so sad lately and I just wanted to offer a lit hope in our tomorrows. Appreciate the review and comments. Have a great day!
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You are so right, and I appreciate the uplifting tale!!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Flash Fiction story you have penned about the special delivery letter that ended up in joyful tears. Great descriptive words and very nice imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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This is a very well written Flash Fiction story you have penned about the special delivery letter that ended up in joyful tears. Great descriptive words and very nice imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Our lives are filled with so much sadness lately and we lose sight of the fact that happiness is there if we open our hearts. Have a great day!
Comment from Sallyo
Awww... let's hope they'd sorted themselves out. We often forget the romance of older partners so it's good to read a story celebrating that on the rebound.
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Awww... let's hope they'd sorted themselves out. We often forget the romance of older partners so it's good to read a story celebrating that on the rebound.
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Sometimes we think the grass is greener on the other side of the fence only to discover that we really had what we wanted in the first place. Happy endings can exist if we open up our hearts.
Have a great day!
Comment from LJbutterfly
I love the way this story is told in an easy conversational tone as though you and your readers are dear old friends. I love the happy ending. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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I love the way this story is told in an easy conversational tone as though you and your readers are dear old friends. I love the happy ending. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Smile, dear friend. Just needed to say that the grass isn't always greener on the other side of the fence, and if we open up our hearts we might discover what we already had. Have a great day!
Comment from Thesis
In a world of disappointments and heartache, it is refreshing to read a happy ending. Your post put a smile on my face. it's nice when people realize the grass is not always greener than what they have.
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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In a world of disappointments and heartache, it is refreshing to read a happy ending. Your post put a smile on my face. it's nice when people realize the grass is not always greener than what they have.
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Sometimes, we think something would be better only to discover that our true happiness was already within our grasp. I prefer to open my heart and find that love. Have a great day!