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War in Gaza

War crimes continue ..numbers below in notes section

2 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This alphabet tale, War in Gaza, has the proper formatting and views the carnage as something other than the innocent suffering because of the cowardice of their professional troublemakers stirring up the superior neighbor. The human shields, used only by Palestinian mercenaries, become the face of this unnecessary fighting.

 Comment Written 22-May-2024


reply by the author on 22-May-2024
    What happened on the 7 th October is horrific but the killing must stop of innocent lives.

    If you have time read the death toll which I included in the note section of UN humanitarian personnel, health workers and reporters.

    In the West Bank there is no Hamas yet the IDF has continued to kill Palestinians.

    If you have time this article
    speaks about this.

    https://www.aljazeera.com/news/2024/5/16/israel-kills-more-than-500-palestinians-in-the-west-bank-since-october-7


Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Your poem is a striking commentary on the conflict in the Middle East. The final lines do an excellent job of sharing widespread silence of nations and the ongoing brutality. You can't help but reflect on how terrible things are. The facts that you shared are shocking and sad. Well written.

 Comment Written 22-May-2024


reply by the author on 22-May-2024
    I definitely think the killing must stop.

    What happened on the 7 th October was horrific but the death toll of children , women, UN workers , health workers, and reporters in Gaza can not be justified.

    I appreciate that you read, reviewed and shared your thoughts.