Why Women Came To Be
A Ruse to Muse28 total reviews
Comment from zaraduck6
A very nice post. I love the word choice you chose and the rhyme scheme was great. The picture you chose to accompany your work really complements the poem. Well done!
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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A very nice post. I love the word choice you chose and the rhyme scheme was great. The picture you chose to accompany your work really complements the poem. Well done!
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Thanks for the positive feedback. You are new to reading me, I think, and appreciate it. I hope you return as I write interesting things about everything when the nerve strikes.
Comment from Ricky1024
Nice work here, Tom Horney.I like how you use the bible and you mix the round with the words to make it fun.
Nothing wrong with.
A little revealing of humor early in the morning and good luck with your contestant entry.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Nice work here, Tom Horney.I like how you use the bible and you mix the round with the words to make it fun.
Nothing wrong with.
A little revealing of humor early in the morning and good luck with your contestant entry.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Even a blind squirrel finds an acorn now and then. Nice to have you revisit, my friend. Have a grand weekend!
Comment from Nicki.B
This was pit a smile on my face, a fun read with a little cheekiness thrown in, I love how it's in tribute to women, who indeed are great, really like your fun referenced to the Bond movies. Well done
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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This was pit a smile on my face, a fun read with a little cheekiness thrown in, I love how it's in tribute to women, who indeed are great, really like your fun referenced to the Bond movies. Well done
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Most must agree. Where would anyone of us be... without a woman? Thank you.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I am not sure how a particular woman impacted your life, but okay I'll go with it. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I am not sure how a particular woman impacted your life, but okay I'll go with it. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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My gal of 45 years made me the man I am by being patient and letting me mature without undue pressure. She was the best woman for ME as hopefully other men feel of their brides.
Thanks for commenting. Now if I can get one more review on the piece...
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Tom.
This is a witty and somewhat erotic poem about the creation of woman.
It shows the power of women over men. I think the beginning of the poem a lot of women would agree with. And also the idea of James Bond without a woman is not imaginable.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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Hi Tom.
This is a witty and somewhat erotic poem about the creation of woman.
It shows the power of women over men. I think the beginning of the poem a lot of women would agree with. And also the idea of James Bond without a woman is not imaginable.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan
Comment Written 03-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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I had fun writing it and haven't received any negative feedback, so the demented mind of mine has struck a gusher I guess, and with that I end expressing my appreciation for your review.
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You are most kindly welcome.
Joan
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
This was a very interesting reas from start to finish. It held my attention well. The graphic was also a nice touch. I wish you luck with your work going forward.
reply by the author on 31-May-2024
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This was a very interesting reas from start to finish. It held my attention well. The graphic was also a nice touch. I wish you luck with your work going forward.
Comment Written 31-May-2024
reply by the author on 31-May-2024
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Welcome to my demented web of mysterious pennings
I appreciate your review
Please come back
Tom
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Tom.
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that.!
I really liked the part where Sean Connery played bond without the blonde. That was funny.
I liked the way you said women were better. Lots of men would agree, I'm sure. But, their other men who think every woman is a slut because Eve ate that apple I think it was meant to be, because otherwise how would they have procreated?
Did you mean ornery here?
" down-right onery"
Here it should.be closely. It is an adverb to look. Close is an adjective. In this case the look is a verb so you need the adverb form
Besides, if you look close
after He delivered Eve "
reply by the author on 31-May-2024
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Hi, Tom.
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that.!
I really liked the part where Sean Connery played bond without the blonde. That was funny.
I liked the way you said women were better. Lots of men would agree, I'm sure. But, their other men who think every woman is a slut because Eve ate that apple I think it was meant to be, because otherwise how would they have procreated?
Did you mean ornery here?
" down-right onery"
Here it should.be closely. It is an adverb to look. Close is an adjective. In this case the look is a verb so you need the adverb form
Besides, if you look close
after He delivered Eve "
Comment Written 31-May-2024
reply by the author on 31-May-2024
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My bad it shud b ornery and it will be when I am done commenting
And you sound to have an inside track re: A and E needing to partake to procreate
Thanks
Comment from Sanku
I am glad i decided to check out your posts.i have been planning to for some time ..somehow it wasnot done) There is a rare funny bone in you ..BAnyway I am glad that you think a woman is God's masterpiece...
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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I am glad i decided to check out your posts.i have been planning to for some time ..somehow it wasnot done) There is a rare funny bone in you ..BAnyway I am glad that you think a woman is God's masterpiece...
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Hey, I understand; I mean, where would men be if not for women?
Thanks for partaking in the feast prepared my demented and mystifying mindless mind. Truly.
Comment from BethShelby
Tom, did all of this come to you while trying to sleep and fighting those cobwebs. Eve might have been more of a seductress with the fig leaf than completely naked. There weren't any kids mentioned until after the fall. Of course. until she managed to douce him with English Leather, she might have preferred talking to the snake.
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Tom, did all of this come to you while trying to sleep and fighting those cobwebs. Eve might have been more of a seductress with the fig leaf than completely naked. There weren't any kids mentioned until after the fall. Of course. until she managed to douce him with English Leather, she might have preferred talking to the snake.
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Your comment in sentence two may be true. I like scantily dressed women.
Until the fall, Adam and Eve hadn't a clue what to do to "replenish the earth." and an afterthought now become me... "replenish?" I guess if they were replacing themselves but at the moment wouldn't plenish the earth be more correct?
As for being tempted what was it the snake or whatever say to sway Eve?
Thanks for the read and comment
Comment from Jim Wile
Oh, do I long for the days when my thingamajig could reach hypotenuse status. Today, I'm happy if it can achieve anything other than an arc. But I'm getting off on a tangent with all this mathematical nomenclature.
As always, this piece of brilliance was both amusing and incomprehensible--a rare skill that you seem to own.
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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Oh, do I long for the days when my thingamajig could reach hypotenuse status. Today, I'm happy if it can achieve anything other than an arc. But I'm getting off on a tangent with all this mathematical nomenclature.
As always, this piece of brilliance was both amusing and incomprehensible--a rare skill that you seem to own.
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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YEs - and I tried to patent it and as I did a lawyer challenge me to prove I was an original. I left thinking only I know.
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Well, you've got us convinced here at FanStory.
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I took my brilliance to the bank to have them grant me a loan,. They would have had I not declined. I felt 50% on 50 cents for a three month period was usury.