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A Gift

Birth is a miraculous moment.

2 total reviews 
Comment from patcelaw
Excellent
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This is beautifully written for the contest, and I wish you the very best of the contest indeed all of the contractions in the pain and the delivery is worth it all to receive a gift from God that have a newborn life. Patricia .

 Comment Written 20-May-2024

reply by the author on 20-May-2024
    I admire women who endure the pain of child birth. I as a male, am glad we are not capable of having a child. Thanks for the read and the review.
Comment from kahpot
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Wow! you have summed up God's gift so very well here, you have made it sound very easy and timeless though, (moms might not agree) an excellent image given in so few words, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 20-May-2024

reply by the author on 20-May-2024
    Yes, I wanted to work pain into it but I ran out of words. Thanks for the honor.