Alphabet Tale
Hope this meets the contest's requirements.23 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. Well, you certainly succeeded in this challenge! And in the process, you created a fun and international event!
Came by to wish you a very Happy Birthday as I just read Debi's poem for you!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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Lol. Well, you certainly succeeded in this challenge! And in the process, you created a fun and international event!
Came by to wish you a very Happy Birthday as I just read Debi's poem for you!
Comment Written 24-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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Every now and then one receives a birthday gift they will forever treasure. This review is a perfect example of such a gift. Thank you, you've made my day,
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This seems like a hard d prompt. But yo did it. Now you have to continue the story so we find out what happened to the kangaroos.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy the rest of your week.
Joan
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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Hi
This seems like a hard d prompt. But yo did it. Now you have to continue the story so we find out what happened to the kangaroos.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy the rest of your week.
Joan
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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Please get your hankie ready. The kangaroos ran down a one-way cul-de-sac got trapped outside a soup factory. They got caught and became kangaroo soup. Not true, but the best I could come up with.
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What a bad way to go. My Kleenex box is now empty.
Joan
Comment from Neonewman
I think this met the contest requirements perfectly and I certainly enjoyed reading this well-crafted piece. Best of luck in the contest.
God bless.
Steve
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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I think this met the contest requirements perfectly and I certainly enjoyed reading this well-crafted piece. Best of luck in the contest.
God bless.
Steve
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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Steve, thank you for stopping by and rating my nonsense. I'm not sure I would have used well-crafted, I think nonsense is a more than adequate response. Again, thank you.
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It's hard to create something like this, you did great.
Comment from estory
This seems like a difficult assignment, and you met the requirements full stop here. I like the rhythm of the wild cascade of words, the colorful imagery contained within, the surreal feel to the scene created. estory
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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This seems like a difficult assignment, and you met the requirements full stop here. I like the rhythm of the wild cascade of words, the colorful imagery contained within, the surreal feel to the scene created. estory
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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What a great review. Your comments are greatly appreciated. Thank you.
Comment from Bill Schott
This alphabet tale, Alphabet Tale, has the proper formatting which fulfills the requirement of words, though the picture formed leaves us marooned in Paraguay with xylophone players.
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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This alphabet tale, Alphabet Tale, has the proper formatting which fulfills the requirement of words, though the picture formed leaves us marooned in Paraguay with xylophone players.
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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Bill, thank you for reading and reviewing my Alphabet Tale. I thought I should add some good news, there'll be no sequel.
Comment from Pam (respa)
You did a good job with your alphabet tale. You have used all the letters of the alphabet and tell a good story. The Canadian doctor made some interesting discoveries. You describe what they are and where he found them. It sounds like the jumping kangaroos will fit right in with
"wild xylophone-playing young Zambezians."
A good entry; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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You did a good job with your alphabet tale. You have used all the letters of the alphabet and tell a good story. The Canadian doctor made some interesting discoveries. You describe what they are and where he found them. It sounds like the jumping kangaroos will fit right in with
"wild xylophone-playing young Zambezians."
A good entry; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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He not only made good discoveries. He also prescribed good medicines. He gave me something that now stops me writing new poetry which will improve Fanstory's poetry site no end.
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Thanks for sharing. When the contest is over, I will take a look at your portfolio😊
Comment from Tina Crute
I found this to be mazing and skillful! This alphabet poem is intensely vivid and so fun for me to read. Well done entry! Good luck in the contest.
Tina
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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I found this to be mazing and skillful! This alphabet poem is intensely vivid and so fun for me to read. Well done entry! Good luck in the contest.
Tina
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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What a lovely comment. You have produced an early morning smile on my face and for that I thank you. I do however, question your taste in poetry. Thank you again
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You're welcome,lol!
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You're welcome,lol!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
the hopping kangaroos must have surprised the doctor. Did you hear that they had released 90 kangaroos in the state of Wyoming? This was so far-fetched and not believable.
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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the hopping kangaroos must have surprised the doctor. Did you hear that they had released 90 kangaroos in the state of Wyoming? This was so far-fetched and not believable.
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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Guess that will put the hop back into Wyoming. The place will now really be jumping. Lucky Wyoming.
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
I really like the unique way of using the alphabet in this. I always think of acrostic poems as one word on each line, but your way encapsulates it perfectly too, in my opinion. What a fun poem!
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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I really like the unique way of using the alphabet in this. I always think of acrostic poems as one word on each line, but your way encapsulates it perfectly too, in my opinion. What a fun poem!
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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It was written as a fun poem, and I'm delighted to know it achieved that purpose with you. Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from Boogienights
I really like your entry, it has a story you can follow and its imaginative. This contest kind of confused me, l thought you could only use one word for each line. You did a great job, best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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I really like your entry, it has a story you can follow and its imaginative. This contest kind of confused me, l thought you could only use one word for each line. You did a great job, best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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Every contest confuses me. So, I go and have three beers and come back to my computer half shot and become a naughty child again. It works for me.