2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 58 "Winter's Tempestuous Wrath".
6 total reviews
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....and one brings a feeling of sadness and unexplained loss to the reader's mind. One can feel her desperate resignation as she senses she's waiting in vain
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....and one brings a feeling of sadness and unexplained loss to the reader's mind. One can feel her desperate resignation as she senses she's waiting in vain
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Mike 😊
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
That's so sad. Kids really hang on to hope. If the dad really did abandon his family, then she would probably be very disappointed if she actually learned about his real character. I like that picture and the comforting presence of her faithful dog.
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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That's so sad. Kids really hang on to hope. If the dad really did abandon his family, then she would probably be very disappointed if she actually learned about his real character. I like that picture and the comforting presence of her faithful dog.
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister.
Love
Marival 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
aww and the girl girl sits and waits...
as hope fades day after day until it's gone
a great free verse
good imagery - especially the scared dog under the bed
smooth flow...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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aww and the girl girl sits and waits...
as hope fades day after day until it's gone
a great free verse
good imagery - especially the scared dog under the bed
smooth flow...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 19-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
The words paint a longing and perhaps a loss of a father. The expectant child, as so many children have had that same experience. The colors and silhouette to me, also define the the mood of the little girl well.
RJ
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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The words paint a longing and perhaps a loss of a father. The expectant child, as so many children have had that same experience. The colors and silhouette to me, also define the the mood of the little girl well.
RJ
Comment Written 19-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Once again, your poem and presentation remind us of your wonderful God given talent and how blessed we are that you chose to share it with us. Thank you.
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Once again, your poem and presentation remind us of your wonderful God given talent and how blessed we are that you chose to share it with us. Thank you.
Comment Written 19-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
It must be a devastating thing for a child if dad doesn't come home, and when he doesn't come home at all unbearable, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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It must be a devastating thing for a child if dad doesn't come home, and when he doesn't come home at all unbearable, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy