Comment from Erika Whittle

Excellent

This is so cute! What a nice little romance poem and it fits the syllable count! It's funny how people drift into our hearts like that. Many times it take us by surprise! Great job.

 Comment Written 20-May-2024

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reply by the author on 20-May-2024

Thank you for the read and encouraging review. Appreciated.

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi whoever you are. Lol

This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck in that.!

I liked your take on love at first sight. I don't think anyone has fallen in love with somebody without seeing their eyes. So, it is appropriate that she swam in his eyes and then into his heart. I like it!

Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 19-May-2024

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reply by the author on 19-May-2024

Hey, thank you for the encouraging review. Appreciated.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This was a great poem for the writing prompt. Your syllable count was correct, and your message was great. "Pools of my eyes" was a wonderful phrase. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 18-May-2024

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reply by the author on 18-May-2024

Thanks for reading and providing feedback.