Sea of Life
the zeno17 total reviews
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
in this sea of
bitter
strife .
Man do I ever feel this. You did a good job with emotion here in a short period of time. All the best going forward!!!
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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in this sea of
bitter
strife .
Man do I ever feel this. You did a good job with emotion here in a short period of time. All the best going forward!!!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for stopping by and spending time to review.I am sorry for the delayed reply.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. This journey we call life we do seems to rush through. God wants us to slow down, listen to Him, and enjoy what He's created for us.
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. This journey we call life we do seems to rush through. God wants us to slow down, listen to Him, and enjoy what He's created for us.
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Sanku.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-A very good opening line followed
by very good descriptive examples
of how some are always in a hurry,
resulting in a lot of problems.
-Very good closing lines, as well.
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Sanku.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-A very good opening line followed
by very good descriptive examples
of how some are always in a hurry,
resulting in a lot of problems.
-Very good closing lines, as well.
Comment Written 19-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Thank you very much.
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You are welcome.
Comment from jaded831
Fun poem. It appeals to both adults and especially children. It is short, true to life, flows well. Is everything a lighthearted poem should be. Great picture, great poem. Together something special.
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Fun poem. It appeals to both adults and especially children. It is short, true to life, flows well. Is everything a lighthearted poem should be. Great picture, great poem. Together something special.
Comment Written 19-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This is cute as if a child wrote it. I am in Plano now. It was two weeks of packing, now it's two weeks of unpacking. My sisters are happy to be five minutes away from me. Life is looking up. Well written, cute picture too. Karen
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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This is cute as if a child wrote it. I am in Plano now. It was two weeks of packing, now it's two weeks of unpacking. My sisters are happy to be five minutes away from me. Life is looking up. Well written, cute picture too. Karen
Comment Written 19-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Thank you very much.
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:-)
Comment from Aussie
Good luck with your Zeno poem for the Club. I have no idea what Zeno is?
I agree with your words, people rushing and heading for life not on this Earth. We are in a soup of sickness. Even the children are killing because they can. Old people are attacked for no reason. And so the melee goes on. K xx
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Good luck with your Zeno poem for the Club. I have no idea what Zeno is?
I agree with your words, people rushing and heading for life not on this Earth. We are in a soup of sickness. Even the children are killing because they can. Old people are attacked for no reason. And so the melee goes on. K xx
Comment Written 18-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Sanku, you have described well what I would call a big city syreet scene where everyone is in such a hurry. I live in regional Queensland and I notice the difference. Good rhyming of life, rife, strife in this zeno poem. I enjoyed the tead.
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Sanku, you have described well what I would call a big city syreet scene where everyone is in such a hurry. I live in regional Queensland and I notice the difference. Good rhyming of life, rife, strife in this zeno poem. I enjoyed the tead.
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 18-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Thank you very much .
Comment from royowen
The trouble these days seems to be is that their is lots and lots of trouble going on around us, whether we can cope or not is another thing entirely, beautifully written my friend, good job, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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The trouble these days seems to be is that their is lots and lots of trouble going on around us, whether we can cope or not is another thing entirely, beautifully written my friend, good job, blessings Roy
Comment Written 18-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Thank you very much.
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Welcome
Comment from GWHARGIS
We do always seem to be in a hurry. No matter what we are doing, there always seems to be something bigger and better ready to be tackled or enjoyed. Great poem for this challenge. Gretchen
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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We do always seem to be in a hurry. No matter what we are doing, there always seems to be something bigger and better ready to be tackled or enjoyed. Great poem for this challenge. Gretchen
Comment Written 18-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Thank you very much.
Comment from estory
Nice use of alliteration, and all those repeating 'ee' sounds to create the music of the poem, and I think you had a great rhythmic sense as well, using all these short, hammering lines to articulate the sense of hammering guns or pounding boots. Great use of form to illustrate theme. estory
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Nice use of alliteration, and all those repeating 'ee' sounds to create the music of the poem, and I think you had a great rhythmic sense as well, using all these short, hammering lines to articulate the sense of hammering guns or pounding boots. Great use of form to illustrate theme. estory
Comment Written 18-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Thank you very much