The Arboreal Raconteur
An owl meets a talkative tree5 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
Personification is what makes this story in a poem delightful. The bark chuckled, leaves chattered, and the trunk wiggled, all providing an engaging visual. Your picture of a smiling tree intensified the meaning of the story. Once again, you've written a creative story in a poem.
reply by the author on 18-May-2024
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Personification is what makes this story in a poem delightful. The bark chuckled, leaves chattered, and the trunk wiggled, all providing an engaging visual. Your picture of a smiling tree intensified the meaning of the story. Once again, you've written a creative story in a poem.
Comment Written 16-May-2024
reply by the author on 18-May-2024
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LJbutterfly,
Thank you for your wonderful review. It is often a surprise to me when my muse inspires me to create a masterpiece.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment from jessizero
This was a fun and funny story poem. I liked your well-spoken tree, and the owl's reaction was great. Thank you for sharing this poem, and best wishes to you.
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This was a fun and funny story poem. I liked your well-spoken tree, and the owl's reaction was great. Thank you for sharing this poem, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 14-May-2024
Comment from Bridge
A lovely story and told so beautifully. I love the rhyming and the cute story about the tree and its bark and leaves. Wishing you the very best in the contest
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A lovely story and told so beautifully. I love the rhyming and the cute story about the tree and its bark and leaves. Wishing you the very best in the contest
Comment Written 14-May-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A wonderful visual indicating that this was going to be a fun verse. You didn't disappoint and I enjoyed this very lively conversation between the tree and the owl. I particularly liked the idea of the tree's trunk wiggling. Your title needs correcting though - A(r)boreal Raconteur.
Great entry! Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 18-May-2024
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A wonderful visual indicating that this was going to be a fun verse. You didn't disappoint and I enjoyed this very lively conversation between the tree and the owl. I particularly liked the idea of the tree's trunk wiggling. Your title needs correcting though - A(r)boreal Raconteur.
Great entry! Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 14-May-2024
reply by the author on 18-May-2024
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Debbie,
Thank you for your wonderful review. It is often a surprise to me when my muse inspires me to create a masterpiece.
All the best,
Eugene
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Whoa! Steady on there, Eugene:))
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is simply delightful! The personification of the tree is so pefect. I love that its bark that chuckles and leaves that chatter. So creative! The interaction between the tree and the owladds to much to your poem. Your poem has such imagination and left a smile on this reviewers face. Great job!
reply by the author on 18-May-2024
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Your poem is simply delightful! The personification of the tree is so pefect. I love that its bark that chuckles and leaves that chatter. So creative! The interaction between the tree and the owladds to much to your poem. Your poem has such imagination and left a smile on this reviewers face. Great job!
Comment Written 14-May-2024
reply by the author on 18-May-2024
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Michael,
Thank you for your wonderful review. It is often a surprise to me when my muse inspires me to create a masterpiece.
All the best,
Eugene
