My Stalker
Someone, or something?9 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
What an imagination you have, Wayne! This ticks all the boxes for me: original, with delightful humour, well structured and expressed and gives all the background to Ohmie and your inspiration for writing. I love the moonwalk and the clothes worn backwards! Brilliant! And all the while you were being stalked by your muse who very nearly came to grief. So you gave us suspense too! Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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What an imagination you have, Wayne! This ticks all the boxes for me: original, with delightful humour, well structured and expressed and gives all the background to Ohmie and your inspiration for writing. I love the moonwalk and the clothes worn backwards! Brilliant! And all the while you were being stalked by your muse who very nearly came to grief. So you gave us suspense too! Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 05-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much.
Just wish more had participated in this contest. Payoff will be pretty meager. But at least I got your great review!
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And a vote:))
Comment from Teri7
Wayne, This is very interesting what you have penned for the My Stalker contest. You used very good descriptive words. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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Wayne, This is very interesting what you have penned for the My Stalker contest. You used very good descriptive words. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 05-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much.
Just wish more had participated in this contest. Payoff will be pretty meager. But at least I got your great review!
Comment from BethShelby
I enjoyed reading this unusual story in which you let into the way your mind words as you create. What a novel approach to actually trying ot see amd deal with the sourse of your inspiration. So your actually saw and tackled your muse and sqeezed him into, but fortunately he still lives and let you know that if your wanted to keep writing you should not kill your muse.
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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I enjoyed reading this unusual story in which you let into the way your mind words as you create. What a novel approach to actually trying ot see amd deal with the sourse of your inspiration. So your actually saw and tackled your muse and sqeezed him into, but fortunately he still lives and let you know that if your wanted to keep writing you should not kill your muse.
Comment Written 17-May-2024
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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Never kill your muse! (smiley face here)
Thank you for your great review and especially for the six stars!
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Wow, what an amazing adventure you took us on. I love your stalker and how he guided you through your tales. Also, being a bit of a science nerd, I like Ohmie. You have a wonderful imagination and a great way of expressing yourself.
I'm glad you didn't kill your poor Muse. How's a guy supposed to do his job with you stalking him back?
Good stuff,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Wow, what an amazing adventure you took us on. I love your stalker and how he guided you through your tales. Also, being a bit of a science nerd, I like Ohmie. You have a wonderful imagination and a great way of expressing yourself.
I'm glad you didn't kill your poor Muse. How's a guy supposed to do his job with you stalking him back?
Good stuff,
Rhonda
Comment Written 15-May-2024
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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smiley face here
Thank you so very much for your great review.
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You're precious!
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
The creativity of this story is phenomenal. You nearly killed the worst thing you could kill, your creativity. Wearing your clothing backwards and moon walking would certainly lure something into your view, but to see him, creativity, is probably paranoid.
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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The creativity of this story is phenomenal. You nearly killed the worst thing you could kill, your creativity. Wearing your clothing backwards and moon walking would certainly lure something into your view, but to see him, creativity, is probably paranoid.
Comment Written 14-May-2024
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Thank you immensely for the great review and for the six stars.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Many writers have used the term "Kill your Darlings, and L. Harper has a novel by the same name. But Roy Peter Clark said the term for this book better with, "Murder Your Darlings." LOL. Thanks for sharing, and not killing your muse. :-)
reply by the author on 14-May-2024
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Many writers have used the term "Kill your Darlings, and L. Harper has a novel by the same name. But Roy Peter Clark said the term for this book better with, "Murder Your Darlings." LOL. Thanks for sharing, and not killing your muse. :-)
Comment Written 14-May-2024
reply by the author on 14-May-2024
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Murder does have a certain 'feel' over kill. I agree. Thanks for the review.
Comment from Wendy G
Well that was quite different. By wearing your coat backwards etc, and being able to confront your stalker, you have succeeded in avoiding being called paranoid. lol. Sending best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 14-May-2024
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Well that was quite different. By wearing your coat backwards etc, and being able to confront your stalker, you have succeeded in avoiding being called paranoid. lol. Sending best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 14-May-2024
reply by the author on 14-May-2024
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Thank you. Different was my goal.
smiley face here
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with this! I hope you still bring back Ohmie now and then. I think he really is one of your brilliant muses. And I like how your walks become the time of stirring creativity for your books! Hope this does well in the contest!
reply by the author on 13-May-2024
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Great job with this! I hope you still bring back Ohmie now and then. I think he really is one of your brilliant muses. And I like how your walks become the time of stirring creativity for your books! Hope this does well in the contest!
Comment Written 13-May-2024
reply by the author on 13-May-2024
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Thank you. I've been wondering whether I'd squeezed all the juice out of Ohmie or not. (smiley face here)
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He's a memorable time-traveling character and a means for you to weave in some science and tech info!
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I have missed him!
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Found it!
Comment from jim vecchio
We both have had similar experiences. Once, awhile back, a pig flew over my home. Realizing it for the ill omen it was, I made contact with my buddy, Morbertroid, a little nipper from the Big Dipper. Ohmie intercepted the message. Ohmie was in need of money again. He tried to contact Warren Buffett, but instead got Buffy from "Family Affair". They're going to show that episode tonight but only I can receive tht station.
reply by the author on 13-May-2024
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We both have had similar experiences. Once, awhile back, a pig flew over my home. Realizing it for the ill omen it was, I made contact with my buddy, Morbertroid, a little nipper from the Big Dipper. Ohmie intercepted the message. Ohmie was in need of money again. He tried to contact Warren Buffett, but instead got Buffy from "Family Affair". They're going to show that episode tonight but only I can receive tht station.
Comment Written 13-May-2024
reply by the author on 13-May-2024
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Hah!
That's rich, a good one.
Still laughing here
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See-You inspired me again!