Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi Aiona,
It seems you found the best and only true way to come to terms with your past with your mother. I am sorry it was a bad relationship. Faith is a good thing to get out of it. Hope she defeats her demons.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a wonderful weekend.
Joan

 Comment Written 18-May-2024

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reply by the author on 26-May-2024

Thanks for your review, Joan. Yes, things are better now that I'm away from her manipulation. I realize now she was trying to get me to do evil things. It's just wrong. I walked away.

reply by dragonpoet on 27-May-2024

You're welcome, Aiona,
Joan

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

This poem radiates positivity. I loved it! I love that you share hope in the face of uncertainty. Your poems unwavering trust in God to guide us through the challenges of each new day brings to me a sense of comfort and strength.

 Comment Written 12-May-2024

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reply by the author on 26-May-2024

Thanks for your review, Michael.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

I think it's a wonderful idea to leave messages on your bathroom mirror for your family to see each day. This message would be a perfect one for the mirror. Patricia .

 Comment Written 11-May-2024

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reply by the author on 26-May-2024

Thanks for your review, Patricia.