It is time
All alone3 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi,
What a sad poem. It could be about depression in general or about grief over the loss of a loved one.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great rest of the day.
Joan
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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Hi,
What a sad poem. It could be about depression in general or about grief over the loss of a loved one.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great rest of the day.
Joan
Comment Written 12-May-2024
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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Thanks Joan. You have a nice day too
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Don?t mention it, Jenni..
Joan
Comment from Wendy Rappeport
A succinct and clever entry. It paints a telling portrait of a lonely, miserable person facing the future, one lonely day at a time. Time can be a bitter opponent to combat.
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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A succinct and clever entry. It paints a telling portrait of a lonely, miserable person facing the future, one lonely day at a time. Time can be a bitter opponent to combat.
Comment Written 11-May-2024
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Thank you so much Wendy.
Comment from kiwisteveh
The stark simplicity of your poem adds to the feeling of despair and loneliness created by your words. Even the letters on the screen seem lonely.
We all know the feeling of not wanting to get up and face the day, but this seems more serious than that.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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The stark simplicity of your poem adds to the feeling of despair and loneliness created by your words. Even the letters on the screen seem lonely.
We all know the feeling of not wanting to get up and face the day, but this seems more serious than that.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
Comment Written 11-May-2024
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Thanks Steve. Have a nice day.