A Welcomed Gift
Every smile is pure and true4 total reviews
Comment from Monica Chaddick
This was a very sweet message that you were able to get across through a short poem. Yes, it seems that everyone understands a smile, no matter where they are from. Even animals seem to respond to smiles. Great job!
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This was a very sweet message that you were able to get across through a short poem. Yes, it seems that everyone understands a smile, no matter where they are from. Even animals seem to respond to smiles. Great job!
Comment Written 10-May-2024
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This poem tells a truth about spreading joy. A simple smile can change someone's day. Bring some brightness into an otherwise dark day.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Have a wonderful weekend.
Joan
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Hi
This poem tells a truth about spreading joy. A simple smile can change someone's day. Bring some brightness into an otherwise dark day.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Have a wonderful weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 10-May-2024
Comment from Nicki.B
That's so true ' a universal welcome smile is everything even to someone who is at their lowest, a smile from a stranger or a loved one means so much. I really like the use of the words radiant and warmth, glow and spark which really portray the best smiles. Well done a lovely feel good poem
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That's so true ' a universal welcome smile is everything even to someone who is at their lowest, a smile from a stranger or a loved one means so much. I really like the use of the words radiant and warmth, glow and spark which really portray the best smiles. Well done a lovely feel good poem
Comment Written 10-May-2024
Comment from Julie Helms
This is a really beautiful description of a smile!
For this contest, all of your lines need to start with the same letter, I believe. You might want to recheck that so you don't get disqualified.
Julie
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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This is a really beautiful description of a smile!
For this contest, all of your lines need to start with the same letter, I believe. You might want to recheck that so you don't get disqualified.
Julie
Comment Written 10-May-2024
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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Julie,
Thank you for your review. I completely missed the requirement that each of the 4 lines needed to start with the same letter of the Alphabet. I've made the necessary changes and revised my entry.
All the best,
Eugene
