Tomatoes
Exotic produce6 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This is a good entry for the prompt. The words match well with the artwork.
Good luck in the contest,
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy your weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Hi
This is a good entry for the prompt. The words match well with the artwork.
Good luck in the contest,
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy your weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 10-May-2024
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Thank you very much.
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You are most kindly welcome.
Joan
Comment from Shanbreen
This poem works well with the technicalities in following the rhyme scheme and making each line start with the same alphabet. I like the imagery too. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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This poem works well with the technicalities in following the rhyme scheme and making each line start with the same alphabet. I like the imagery too. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-May-2024
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Thank you very much.
Comment from gansach
This is a nice entry for the four line poem competition--the choice of artwork and description of tomatoes make me crave a good tomato sandwich. Nice job--good luck!
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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This is a nice entry for the four line poem competition--the choice of artwork and description of tomatoes make me crave a good tomato sandwich. Nice job--good luck!
Comment Written 10-May-2024
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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I was just inspired by some tomatoes from my local supermarket. Thank you.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought your poem was so unique. With just four lines you share imagery of the tomatoes and a catchy rhythm. I like the use of rhyme in this poem. It enhances the playful tone! I think this would be fun to read aloud to a child! I can hear the giggling. This a delightful poem to the tomato!
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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I thought your poem was so unique. With just four lines you share imagery of the tomatoes and a catchy rhythm. I like the use of rhyme in this poem. It enhances the playful tone! I think this would be fun to read aloud to a child! I can hear the giggling. This a delightful poem to the tomato!
Comment Written 10-May-2024
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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You are very kind. Thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Of course tomatoes can be grown in less exotic places these days but I had a sense of heat in the last line of your poem, good luck with the contest, this post sounds delicious, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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Of course tomatoes can be grown in less exotic places these days but I had a sense of heat in the last line of your poem, good luck with the contest, this post sounds delicious, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-May-2024
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Dr. Nad
This is a delicious looking picture to accompany a poem that elicits the best in our taste buds. Best of luck in the contest. Embrace the love from above.
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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This is a delicious looking picture to accompany a poem that elicits the best in our taste buds. Best of luck in the contest. Embrace the love from above.
Comment Written 09-May-2024
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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Thank you for your kind review.
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You are most welcome.
