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A Year On The Edge

Where Happiness Lies

4 total reviews 
Comment from Kelly Louisa Balliu
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Your story is very encouraging and shows that there is always the possibility that happiness is around the corner following such tragedy and that it's up to the individual to be brave and make that change. I guess the hardest thing is to make that huge step because no-one can predict what happens afterwards.

I like the way it ends, with the reader wanting more. Maybe there could be a sequel? :-)

 Comment Written 15-May-2024


reply by the author on 15-May-2024
    Thank you Kelly such a lovely review. I could do a sequel:)

    Judith
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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A wonderful attitude considering... but the alternative to living is death and since you went from birth to accomplishing all you HAD there is nothing that can stop you from a full recovery, is there
Best wishes

 Comment Written 12-May-2024


reply by the author on 13-May-2024
    Thank you, I think:) not sure if this is a backhanded compliment, it's too early in the morning to care
reply by the author on 13-May-2024
    Not a poem about recovery. It's about excitement and the new
Comment from Thesis
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I am impressed by the passion and hope expressed in this story. After all the character endured, the outlook on life is very inspiring. Loss requires change, but how one reacts is priceless.

 Comment Written 09-May-2024


reply by the author on 10-May-2024
    I feel that so much character is built through adversity. Then too the relationships you build during adversity are really special.

    Thank you for reading
Comment from zanya
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A story of bravery and optimism and hope having come through a lot of life difficulties along the way - I'd love to know what happened next!! Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 09-May-2024


reply by the author on 09-May-2024
    Thank you Zanya.
    I will tell you after the contest!