Last Winter of the Ghost Road
Historical Narrative of the Lakota.6 total reviews
Comment from Andrea Kepple
Thank you for sharing this poem. You have crafted this poem in a beautiful way, the word choice carries the reader along through the story. This is a poem that can be read over and over with another layer of meaning revealing itself every time.
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Thank you for sharing this poem. You have crafted this poem in a beautiful way, the word choice carries the reader along through the story. This is a poem that can be read over and over with another layer of meaning revealing itself every time.
Comment Written 11-May-2024
Comment from royowen
A well written poem with some interesting name, with which I'm not aware of, I can't really review it with a great deal of confidence, but well done, it's good to see something different, and this is, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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A well written poem with some interesting name, with which I'm not aware of, I can't really review it with a great deal of confidence, but well done, it's good to see something different, and this is, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-May-2024
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I liked reading this. I especially appreciated the author notes and what the idioms actually were. This seems to be a unique, original take on the writing prompt. The only suggestion I have is to make the font bigger. Lately I look at 18 point and 20 point fonts more often when I post.
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I liked reading this. I especially appreciated the author notes and what the idioms actually were. This seems to be a unique, original take on the writing prompt. The only suggestion I have is to make the font bigger. Lately I look at 18 point and 20 point fonts more often when I post.
Comment Written 10-May-2024
Comment from Dr. Nad
This is an excellent poem that walks us through routines that most of us are not used to. Thank you for the authors notes that provide all the names and definitions. Thank you for honoring the Lakota tribe of Native Americans!
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This is an excellent poem that walks us through routines that most of us are not used to. Thank you for the authors notes that provide all the names and definitions. Thank you for honoring the Lakota tribe of Native Americans!
Comment Written 09-May-2024
Comment from Nicki Nance
This is a beautiful and poignant story told poetically. The structure of the poem and your echoing last lines took me to the border, the middle east, and the streets of many cities. Thank you for the great read.
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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This is a beautiful and poignant story told poetically. The structure of the poem and your echoing last lines took me to the border, the middle east, and the streets of many cities. Thank you for the great read.
Comment Written 09-May-2024
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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Thank you very much Nicki!
Comment from Douglas Goff
That was a nice touch adding the information at the end. Very good.
I wonder how many tribes just vanished due to weather and starvation. Probably many.
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reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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That was a nice touch adding the information at the end. Very good.
I wonder how many tribes just vanished due to weather and starvation. Probably many.
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Comment Written 08-May-2024
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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I am glad that you did read the translation and enjoyed the poem.