Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective nature and seasonal imagery.
-A very good description of the
Flower Moon lighting up a night in May.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-May-2024

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reply by the author on 13-May-2024

Great review zanya

reply by Pam (respa) on 13-May-2024

You are welcome.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

Well, I had no idea May's moon had a name. This very short poem paints a serene scene anyone would enjoy. I like the fact that your three-line poem is a complete sentence. Rod

 Comment Written 07-May-2024

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reply by the author on 13-May-2024

Thanks for reading and those interesting comments, zanya