Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

Don't you mean the last eight years? Mara is seven.
I don't think Brenda had sex with him the minute she saw him, so , eight years at least. Nice story. Funny.
Karen

 Comment Written 05-May-2024

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reply by the author on 05-May-2024

Or maybe the milkman started his food deliveries some time 'after' (and because) he began the affair with Brenda. Thank you for reviewing

reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 05-May-2024

That's too much for us to have to surmise. I edited. So can you. :-)

Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

Oopsie Daisy...definitely a good revelation story. Poor Henrik probably should have picked up on this a tad earlier. Genetics are a funny thing, but probably not three times in a row!
Julie

 Comment Written 05-May-2024

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reply by the author on 05-May-2024

Haha! Thanks so much for your kind review.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I thought you did a great job with this story. The initial shock and confusion upon realizing that his newborn son doesn't resemble him was terrific. The use of dialogue does a wonderful job of sharing what's going on here. Sounds like the the milk man needs a health talk to! Great job! This was a fun read.

 Comment Written 05-May-2024

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reply by the author on 05-May-2024

Thanks so much for your kind review.