2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 55 "Fire On the Mountain".
7 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
What a beautiful description of love's longing, it reminds me of my younger days when meeting/seeing someone the first time, so much to say though only silence was heard****kahpot
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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What a beautiful description of love's longing, it reminds me of my younger days when meeting/seeing someone the first time, so much to say though only silence was heard****kahpot
Comment Written 04-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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You are right, the first days of a love relationship is magical.. nothing feels as good. Are you from Australia? I don't know. I have a few friends from there. My best friend lives in New Zealand. His place is beautiful.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Yes, Marival, I live in Queensland Australia, New Zealand is a very beautiful place, though in sports they are our rivals, we really do love them
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Oh, thank you, kym. Sport rivals? Haha
Now I have 3 friends in Australia.
Comment from shelley kaye
i loved this line for some reason: he caressed the center of my universe -
hopefully fulfilling
great imagery and a smooth flow of romance...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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i loved this line for some reason: he caressed the center of my universe -
hopefully fulfilling
great imagery and a smooth flow of romance...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 04-May-2024
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Once again and other beautiful poem fill with passion. To feel that much love for another person is a wonderful feeling. It mirrors the love God has for us. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Once again and other beautiful poem fill with passion. To feel that much love for another person is a wonderful feeling. It mirrors the love God has for us. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Comment Written 04-May-2024
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
This shows a lot of passion - perhaps between lovers - or perhaps even between human and God. There is an ethereal - bodyless feeling. And the "largeness" shows that there's more spirit than physical being.
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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This shows a lot of passion - perhaps between lovers - or perhaps even between human and God. There is an ethereal - bodyless feeling. And the "largeness" shows that there's more spirit than physical being.
Comment Written 04-May-2024
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Mmmm I was not thinking about Jesus when I wrote it but going back now it could definitely be about Him.
Thank you very much, big sister.
Love
Marival
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Thus is an excellent poem and presentation. It reminds me of how intimate people often are attracted because they each possess attributes that the other lacks. If two people complement each other, they are each made more powerful. Well written and beautifully presented.
Love, Alexan :)
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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Thus is an excellent poem and presentation. It reminds me of how intimate people often are attracted because they each possess attributes that the other lacks. If two people complement each other, they are each made more powerful. Well written and beautifully presented.
Love, Alexan :)
Comment Written 03-May-2024
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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Thank you very much, alexan.
Love, marival
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Of course. You're welcome. I enjoy your work. Love, Alexan
Comment from RJ Heritage
It is a deep and passionate poem that freely released the hidden inhibitions of perhaps the poet? Nevertheless, it seems to be freeing deep feelings.
Thank you for sharing this beautifully written piece of poetry. As usual the colors are splendid.
RJ
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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It is a deep and passionate poem that freely released the hidden inhibitions of perhaps the poet? Nevertheless, it seems to be freeing deep feelings.
Thank you for sharing this beautifully written piece of poetry. As usual the colors are splendid.
RJ
Comment Written 03-May-2024
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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It's fiction but I have felt that kind of passion.
Thank you very much, RJ. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very well written poem with a lot of great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the artwork you used. You always have the most beautiful artwork. A joy to read and review! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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Gypsy, This is a very well written poem with a lot of great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the artwork you used. You always have the most beautiful artwork. A joy to read and review! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 03-May-2024
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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Thank you, Teri. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy