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Vote for Jake Senryu

political slogan for a future campaign

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Comment from Andrea Kepple
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Your poem made me smile. This is the best I have felt about an election slogan all election season.

I like how you set up the poem to mimic what is seen on campaign signs. I like the flow of the poem.

Best of luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 06-May-2024


reply by the author on 07-May-2024
    thanks as always
Comment from LoAnn Beery
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I think I might just vote for this guy.I think the fact that he is not a fake is truly important in any election, lol...Good idea in which to set the poem.

 Comment Written 06-May-2024


reply by the author on 06-May-2024
    thanks as usual
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Well I voted yesterday and your post made me smile with your matching rhymes and your sound advice. Finding a political leader with integrity is a hard task these days, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-May-2024


reply by the author on 04-May-2024
    thanks as always
Comment from Mymy Khan
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Witty and amusing slogan. It cuts to the chase and I love the way it all rhymes. I also like its authenticity. Really catches the reader's attention. Well done, mate.

 Comment Written 02-May-2024


reply by the author on 04-May-2024
    thanks