2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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7 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet, you now have 4 votes.
I never thought I would ever find joy in writing in rhyme.
I can see that poetry is a big part of your everyday life. You also put a lot of effort in find the best artwork to showcase your words.
Your post are a delight for the ear and sight.
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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Ciao poet, you now have 4 votes.
I never thought I would ever find joy in writing in rhyme.
I can see that poetry is a big part of your everyday life. You also put a lot of effort in find the best artwork to showcase your words.
Your post are a delight for the ear and sight.
Comment Written 07-May-2024
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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Thank you very much, tempeste I appreciate your kind review.
Ciao
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You are welcome😐
I hope you have a sunny Sunday! 🌞
Comment from LoAnn Beery
This was clever, smooth, and made me smile.
It was well-penned that you thought of making the directions, it's own poem. I loved the beautiful illustration, too.
reply by the author on 06-May-2024
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This was clever, smooth, and made me smile.
It was well-penned that you thought of making the directions, it's own poem. I loved the beautiful illustration, too.
Comment Written 06-May-2024
reply by the author on 06-May-2024
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Thank you very much (*<>*)
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Cute. Sweet. Succinct. I am moving on May18th. So I may not be on much for a while, lots to do. I am moving from Houston, Texas to Plano, Texas which is just outside Dallas. My three sisters live there. I am happy about it. Karen
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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Cute. Sweet. Succinct. I am moving on May18th. So I may not be on much for a while, lots to do. I am moving from Houston, Texas to Plano, Texas which is just outside Dallas. My three sisters live there. I am happy about it. Karen
Comment Written 03-May-2024
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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Oh, I'm happy for you. Its good to be with family.
Thank you very much for your excellent review.
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Thank you. Karen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed your message here as those Haiku deliver a short message with a long and lingering meaning, a fine post for the contest, love Dolly x x x x x
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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I enjoyed your message here as those Haiku deliver a short message with a long and lingering meaning, a fine post for the contest, love Dolly x x x x x
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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Thank you very much, dolly
Comment from Julie Helms
Since you didn't use all of your syllables, you could correct the mistake in the prompt with "17 syllables or fewer".
:-)
Sorry, there's probably a bad joke in there somewhere about what happens when an editor and a poet get together.
You did a fun take on the prompt with beautiful accompanying images.
Thanks for sharing!
Julie
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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Since you didn't use all of your syllables, you could correct the mistake in the prompt with "17 syllables or fewer".
:-)
Sorry, there's probably a bad joke in there somewhere about what happens when an editor and a poet get together.
You did a fun take on the prompt with beautiful accompanying images.
Thanks for sharing!
Julie
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Julie. The haiku or senryu rule is 17 syllables or less
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I know, I was referring to the grammar. "Less" is incorrect. It's "fewer". I'm just being goofy. :-)
Comment from Cristine22
So, does this mean that you write so many haikus that all your written communications are in 17 syllables? Haha. I love it! I also love the presentation. Quite lovely!
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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So, does this mean that you write so many haikus that all your written communications are in 17 syllables? Haha. I love it! I also love the presentation. Quite lovely!
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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LoL the haiku poet speaks and writes in 17 syllables or less.
Thank you very much, Cristine.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was a clever poem. I love the humor in it. And he final line, "or less," cleverly completes the haiku format - by adhering to its own rule! It reinforces the idea that haiku poets strive for brevity and conciseness in their work!
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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I thought this was a clever poem. I love the humor in it. And he final line, "or less," cleverly completes the haiku format - by adhering to its own rule! It reinforces the idea that haiku poets strive for brevity and conciseness in their work!
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Yes! you got it. Thank you very much, Michael.