Creative Juices
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is a well presented post with a relatable message colourfully contained within it. Why is it that it all seems so clear one minute and then all is forgotten the next? Well done for this! However I've just realised your first line is 6 syllables. Perhaps: Words flow (in) my head? Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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This is a well presented post with a relatable message colourfully contained within it. Why is it that it all seems so clear one minute and then all is forgotten the next? Well done for this! However I've just realised your first line is 6 syllables. Perhaps: Words flow (in) my head? Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 03-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Thanks for catching that, I changed it. Thanks for your review!
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Oh, I know the feeling. I hate when words and rhyme swirl around in my head keeping me awake, but deserting me when I wake up and want to write them down. Very nice entry for the contest. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Oh, I know the feeling. I hate when words and rhyme swirl around in my head keeping me awake, but deserting me when I wake up and want to write them down. Very nice entry for the contest. Best of luck.
Comment Written 03-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Thanks so much, voting is open.
Comment from nancyjam
If only we could record our dreams. I think your 5-7-5 will resonate with many here. Many have written about writer's block so you're not alone.
Maybe try "day" dreaming. Hope your muse returns.
Nancy
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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If only we could record our dreams. I think your 5-7-5 will resonate with many here. Many have written about writer's block so you're not alone.
Maybe try "day" dreaming. Hope your muse returns.
Nancy
Comment Written 03-May-2024
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from pome lover
yeah, waking up and writing them down helps. Sometimes when I feel empty of ideas I'll look at an object - like the candy dish - or think of something that made me laugh, or get angry, or hungry, or, the dear old news. or thoughts while stuck in traffic, etc. :)
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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yeah, waking up and writing them down helps. Sometimes when I feel empty of ideas I'll look at an object - like the candy dish - or think of something that made me laugh, or get angry, or hungry, or, the dear old news. or thoughts while stuck in traffic, etc. :)
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from jmdg1954
Author,
It's almost like you need to write down your poem, thoughts and ideas telepathically so they are not forgotten while in sleep mode.
Hmmm, that may be a good story idea. A new invention. Theres probably something on the market already...
Nicely written and shared.
John
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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Author,
It's almost like you need to write down your poem, thoughts and ideas telepathically so they are not forgotten while in sleep mode.
Hmmm, that may be a good story idea. A new invention. Theres probably something on the market already...
Nicely written and shared.
John
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
So true, we think of all sorts of helpful words for our poetry when we lay our weary head, but when we wake they have all disappeared! I can identify with your words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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So true, we think of all sorts of helpful words for our poetry when we lay our weary head, but when we wake they have all disappeared! I can identify with your words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Sallyo
...or maybe missing in action. The good thing about this sort of block is that it proves the ideas are there... they just have to be given the kiss of life.
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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...or maybe missing in action. The good thing about this sort of block is that it proves the ideas are there... they just have to be given the kiss of life.
Comment Written 01-May-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Wojciech Gurak
Well written 5-7-5 about creative juices. Funny and true. What's not to like. Very relatable. I have the same issue, so pen and notebook are always close by.
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Well written 5-7-5 about creative juices. Funny and true. What's not to like. Very relatable. I have the same issue, so pen and notebook are always close by.
Comment Written 01-May-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Douglas Goff
There seems to be a whole lot going on over there in your bed. Oh my!
Seriously, nice color scheme and great rhymes. I think you shall do well!
D
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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There seems to be a whole lot going on over there in your bed. Oh my!
Seriously, nice color scheme and great rhymes. I think you shall do well!
D
Comment Written 01-May-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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LOL! Thank you so much! Sometimes I'm lucky & inspiration strikes when I'm wide awake.