Parting
A poem told in 1-6-1 that rhymes3 total reviews
Comment from fm wright
The photo from which this was taken is of course iconic. This poem written in 1-6-1 does justice I think to the source. Well done. Best of wishes in this contest.
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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The photo from which this was taken is of course iconic. This poem written in 1-6-1 does justice I think to the source. Well done. Best of wishes in this contest.
Comment Written 01-May-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Thank you for your review and feedback.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was great. Your poem captures a sense of whimsy and flirtation with its kiss goodbye. I love the repetition of the "iss" sound in "miss," "remiss," and "kiss". Very creative and I think it adds a musical quality to the poem.
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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I thought this was great. Your poem captures a sense of whimsy and flirtation with its kiss goodbye. I love the repetition of the "iss" sound in "miss," "remiss," and "kiss". Very creative and I think it adds a musical quality to the poem.
Comment Written 01-May-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Thank you for your review and feedback.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Rhyme that 1-6-1 writing prompt. A very creative three word choice for this poems rhymes. The artwork is perfect for the presentation. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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An excellent entry for the Rhyme that 1-6-1 writing prompt. A very creative three word choice for this poems rhymes. The artwork is perfect for the presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Thank you for the review and feedback.