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Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "iVanish"Verses of personification
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Our phones are stored in the oddest places and they often hide themselves from us! I loved this cheerful and humorous post about the life of a mobile phone, I was amused here Jessica, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Our phones are stored in the oddest places and they often hide themselves from us! I loved this cheerful and humorous post about the life of a mobile phone, I was amused here Jessica, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Thank you so much, Dolly!
Xoxo
Jess
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Jessica!
I love the humor in this one! I think we can all relate to losing our phones... almost daily lol
This is great personification. Love it!
Kim
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Hi Jessica!
I love the humor in this one! I think we can all relate to losing our phones... almost daily lol
This is great personification. Love it!
Kim
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Thank you so much, Kim! It's a struggle lol
Xo
Jess
Comment from nancyjam
This is very funny and I'm sure so true from a phone's point of view.
I'm guilty of misplacing my phone (but never in the freezer!)
Great rhyme and meter with lots of great images for a very entertaining read. Nancy
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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This is very funny and I'm sure so true from a phone's point of view.
I'm guilty of misplacing my phone (but never in the freezer!)
Great rhyme and meter with lots of great images for a very entertaining read. Nancy
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Thank you, Nancy!
Xo
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Even your title has a nice little inclusion of 'i' referring to the phone. Frankly, I wouldn't mind losing mine but that's another issue! Once again you've done what, at first, might seem a complex task, but achieved with aplomb! Personification of that elusive little device. I thought/hoped there might be some pain when the charger was inserted! Enjoyed your humour and creativity here. I can't help thinking you must be a fun Mom to have around! Take care Debbie xo
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Even your title has a nice little inclusion of 'i' referring to the phone. Frankly, I wouldn't mind losing mine but that's another issue! Once again you've done what, at first, might seem a complex task, but achieved with aplomb! Personification of that elusive little device. I thought/hoped there might be some pain when the charger was inserted! Enjoyed your humour and creativity here. I can't help thinking you must be a fun Mom to have around! Take care Debbie xo
Comment Written 01-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Debbie, you?re the best! And, I try. lol
Xoxo
Jess
Comment from LJbutterfly
You chose the perfect title and cartoon artwork for the subject of your poetry. It is humorous and relatable. Cell phones are a necessary nuisance that needs to be cared for, protected, charged, rebooted, and always kept near your person. You've done an excellent job conveying that message in your well rhymed, fun poetry.
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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You chose the perfect title and cartoon artwork for the subject of your poetry. It is humorous and relatable. Cell phones are a necessary nuisance that needs to be cared for, protected, charged, rebooted, and always kept near your person. You've done an excellent job conveying that message in your well rhymed, fun poetry.
Comment Written 01-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Thank you so much!!!
Xo
Comment from gansach
LOL! The dangers of being a cell phone (or cell phone owner-which is probably why I don't have one). This is well written, great rhyme scheme and meter, love the alliteration in the 3rd stanza, the humor is wonderful. Great job!
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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LOL! The dangers of being a cell phone (or cell phone owner-which is probably why I don't have one). This is well written, great rhyme scheme and meter, love the alliteration in the 3rd stanza, the humor is wonderful. Great job!
Comment Written 01-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Thank you! This was a fun one lol
Comment from GoWiSt
" her shoe," Uh, really??
Good reading flow and abab rhyme scheme in the quatrains.
Nice, apt complementary picture art.
Humorously interesting personification of a phone.
"Dare I say, the charger? Kitchen counter? By the bed?" Uh, boring, boring, boring!
Good imagery, as I could envision all those places the poor phone had been neglected.
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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" her shoe," Uh, really??
Good reading flow and abab rhyme scheme in the quatrains.
Nice, apt complementary picture art.
Humorously interesting personification of a phone.
"Dare I say, the charger? Kitchen counter? By the bed?" Uh, boring, boring, boring!
Good imagery, as I could envision all those places the poor phone had been neglected.
Comment Written 01-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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lol I love this. Thanks for your review and sense of humor!
Xo
Comment from Sarita Méndez
I love this personification! And I'm quite sure that this must happen more than once to a lot of people!
Thank you very much for sharing this funny text.
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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I love this personification! And I'm quite sure that this must happen more than once to a lot of people!
Thank you very much for sharing this funny text.
Comment Written 01-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Thank you so much! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it! Xo
Comment from barbara.wilkey
After I read this, I realized I had no clue where my phone is. The last thing I remember is putting in my purse while I went to the gym. Humm, the gas station, the stopped to get an iced caramel coffee, the ban, then the grocery store, then back home. I think I'd better find it. Darn thing!!! I did enjoy reading.
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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After I read this, I realized I had no clue where my phone is. The last thing I remember is putting in my purse while I went to the gym. Humm, the gas station, the stopped to get an iced caramel coffee, the ban, then the grocery store, then back home. I think I'd better find it. Darn thing!!! I did enjoy reading.
Comment Written 01-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Lol! That is too funny, Barbara! I hope you found it!!
Xo
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Jessica lived this as the meter skipped along really well and you captured many a moment of your poor phone's distress lol. A well written poem fun to read and I am sure many could identify with
What about the cracked screen from dropping it accidentally Mine has a few lol
Great poem Jessica a six from me
Cheers Chrisx
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Hi Jessica lived this as the meter skipped along really well and you captured many a moment of your poor phone's distress lol. A well written poem fun to read and I am sure many could identify with
What about the cracked screen from dropping it accidentally Mine has a few lol
Great poem Jessica a six from me
Cheers Chrisx
Comment Written 01-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Chris, I appreciate your kind words and sense of humor so much!! Thank you! Xoxo
