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Striving For Peace

Peace is what you strive for.

4 total reviews 
Comment from BermyBye50
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Raul,

Congrats on winning the Rhyme That 1-6-1 Contest. Your 1-6-1 poem reflects the theme. However, peace and please do not rhyme nor are they near rhymes.

All the best,

Bermybye50

 Comment Written 04-May-2024

reply by the author on 04-May-2024
    Thank you!
Comment from tempeste
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Ciao mystery poet, you now have 9 votes.

The message is clear shame our leaders have their agendas and we the people pay the price.

Lovely artwork to enhance your words!


 Comment Written 02-May-2024

reply by the author on 02-May-2024
    Thank you so much!
reply by tempeste on 02-May-2024
    You are welcome!
    ☮️ 🌈 ✌️
Comment from Nicki.B
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I love this, an important message expressed with minimal words! The image is beautiful and reflects the poem nicely. This size poem it's can be difficult with little room for words, you captured it very well! Good for you

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
    Thank you!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Simple yet profound. I love how you ended it. The plea to "cease" speaks so clearly on the desire for this to end. I thought with so few words that you have written a poem that says so much.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
    Thank you!