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Comment from
artisart4u
This is a nice religious poem about God's grace.
It was good to see the capital letters use when you wrote "Him" and etc
Your picture has a good message and the whole post was lively.
Good luck with your poem.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
Thank you very much! Sorry my wifi has been delaying my replies.
Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
This is a beautiful poem. For me it captures the journey of separation from God due to sin to redemption because of the sacrifice of Jesus Christ. I love that message and you share it so well. For me the highlight of your poem was the imagery of birds and beasts fleeing. Why? Because we bear the burden of sin.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
Thank you very much! Sorry my wifi has been delaying my replies.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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