Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Very well written 15 syllable poem and I enjoyed reading it very much. It flows very well. When read aloud I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I wish you the very best in the contest. Patricia .

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024

Thank you so much.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I really liked your poem. I've never seen this format before that I recall, but I think you did a great job. It's fun to look and wonder what will happen in the future. Thank you so much for sharing this poem here, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024

Thank you so much.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

How sweet! Of course, since their moms are best friends, I'm pretty sure that they will see a lot of each other all their lives. Thanks for sharing the cute poem and picture!

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024

Thank you so much! They truly are adorable!
Kim

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

An excellent entry for the Fifteen Syllable Poem contest. The syllables meet the criteria. both babies are precious. It would be interesting to see what they do turn out to be to each other. Maybe more of a brother/sisiter relationship. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024

Thank you, Marilyn!
I think so, too!

Kim

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Two very cute babies and I say they will become like brother and sister if their mums are close friends. That;s what happened with my kids and their close childhood friends. I enjoyed your 15 syllables Kim.
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024

Thank you, Valda! I think you are right!

Kim