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Comment from Pearl Edwards
Gorgeous photograph Kim and it certainly would be inspiring sitting in the sunshine at 9pm. I loved this 3-6-9 form using the numbers as part of the poem. A sense of being at peace with your world in this one Kim. Loved it, cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Gorgeous photograph Kim and it certainly would be inspiring sitting in the sunshine at 9pm. I loved this 3-6-9 form using the numbers as part of the poem. A sense of being at peace with your world in this one Kim. Loved it, cheers
Valda
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Valda! I appreciate you!
Kim
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
If our eyes are open to the world we get to see these magical scenes and contemplate life. A fine moment captures in time here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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If our eyes are open to the world we get to see these magical scenes and contemplate life. A fine moment captures in time here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much, Dolly!
Comment from Sallyo
Beautiful- a form I haven't seen before and I assume you (or Tesla) invented it. The idea of endless day is intriguing and you capture the magic and mystery of every day perfectly.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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Beautiful- a form I haven't seen before and I assume you (or Tesla) invented it. The idea of endless day is intriguing and you capture the magic and mystery of every day perfectly.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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Hi Sally!
I am honored by that sixth star and your kind words. The 3-6-9 has been a common site contest for a few years now.
Kim
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem beautifully captures the beauty of April. You paint a wonderful scene and share a picture of the changing seasons. The imagery of basking in the sun while observing the flight of six swans is my favorite part. For me I could feel peace and admiration for nature's beauty. Loved that!
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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Your poem beautifully captures the beauty of April. You paint a wonderful scene and share a picture of the changing seasons. The imagery of basking in the sun while observing the flight of six swans is my favorite part. For me I could feel peace and admiration for nature's beauty. Loved that!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much, Michael! I appreciate the kind comments.
Kim
Comment from Mark Jackson
You have gone above and beyond in this writing. Not only does it meet the requirements of the contest you have also added a rhyming scheme and continued the theme into the content of your poem. You have set the bar very high for this contest. Good luck, it could be a winner.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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You have gone above and beyond in this writing. Not only does it meet the requirements of the contest you have also added a rhyming scheme and continued the theme into the content of your poem. You have set the bar very high for this contest. Good luck, it could be a winner.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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Thank you for the high praise, Mark! I appreciate your compliments.
Kim
Comment from lyenochka
Ah, thanks for sharing that Tesla quote. I now understand why you used the three, six, nine in your first lines. And I like how you used a longer verb to end each third line. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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Ah, thanks for sharing that Tesla quote. I now understand why you used the three, six, nine in your first lines. And I like how you used a longer verb to end each third line. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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Hi Helen!
It was a fascinating quote and matched the contest perfectly. I appreciate your comments.
Kim