Battling the brain
You'll never find a rainbow if your looking down2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was very creative. This dialogue between Amanda and her "brain" for me shares the struggle many people face when dealing with mental health. I think you do so though in such a positive way. This was enjoyable and uplifting. Very creative and well written.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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I thought this was very creative. This dialogue between Amanda and her "brain" for me shares the struggle many people face when dealing with mental health. I think you do so though in such a positive way. This was enjoyable and uplifting. Very creative and well written.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Aww thank you so much ! Glad you enjoyed it. Appreciate the comment :)
Comment from Julie Helms
This is a conversation I think most people can relate to, to some degree. You did a good job going through the process that sounds here like a regular morning ritual.
I have a few suggestions for typos:
You'll never find a rainbow if *your* looking down
(you're)
I've played one *to* many times.
(too)
Then tell me *your* fine.
(you're)
You say *your* my friend,
(you're)
Thanks for sharing!
Julie
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This is a conversation I think most people can relate to, to some degree. You did a good job going through the process that sounds here like a regular morning ritual.
I have a few suggestions for typos:
You'll never find a rainbow if *your* looking down
(you're)
I've played one *to* many times.
(too)
Then tell me *your* fine.
(you're)
You say *your* my friend,
(you're)
Thanks for sharing!
Julie
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
