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Comment from shelley kaye
ooh cool dewdrop haiku
shiny beads
all lined up
on sharp blades
of soft grass
nice one with good imagery
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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ooh cool dewdrop haiku
shiny beads
all lined up
on sharp blades
of soft grass
nice one with good imagery
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
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Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
Your haiku poetry always makes me take pause and breathe. I guess that's what's it's supposed to do. You are supposed to see and feel the poem. You just seem to be so very good at it. I've never read any that are wooden feeling or seem like they are forced. This one was no exception. Thank you for sharing your talent. Gretchen
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Your haiku poetry always makes me take pause and breathe. I guess that's what's it's supposed to do. You are supposed to see and feel the poem. You just seem to be so very good at it. I've never read any that are wooden feeling or seem like they are forced. This one was no exception. Thank you for sharing your talent. Gretchen
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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You are right and understand haiku well.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
It's beautiful how all of life is dependent on water. And thought grief is expressed in the water of tears, we also get refreshment and new life through the rain and dewdrops.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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It's beautiful how all of life is dependent on water. And thought grief is expressed in the water of tears, we also get refreshment and new life through the rain and dewdrops.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for, big sister. Have a wonderful night.
Love
Marival
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🙏💖 Have a good rest. Hope you got my email.
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, your poem is beautifully penned and has high sensory appeal.
It made me think of Brook ~ adewdrop. Of note:
life still blooms
in a dewdrop
(It truly does)
Perfect photo choice. Beautiful presentation. Xo. M
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Hi Gypsy, your poem is beautifully penned and has high sensory appeal.
It made me think of Brook ~ adewdrop. Of note:
life still blooms
in a dewdrop
(It truly does)
Perfect photo choice. Beautiful presentation. Xo. M
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend. Have a wonderful night.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Douglas Goff
I know this is only a 1/2 but I just had to review it. The entire presentation is absolutely beautiful.
The picture is incredible and the way you shaded it was perfect This is one of my favorite pieces that you have done. It sucks when someone says they wish they had a six for this one, but I really do.
Nicely done.
Douglas
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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I know this is only a 1/2 but I just had to review it. The entire presentation is absolutely beautiful.
The picture is incredible and the way you shaded it was perfect This is one of my favorite pieces that you have done. It sucks when someone says they wish they had a six for this one, but I really do.
Nicely done.
Douglas
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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It's a half? I don't understand.
Thank you very much, my friend. Have a wonderful night.
Gypsy hugs
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Sorry 1 point 2 cents. Some on here reference that as a 1/2.
Good morning!
Comment from RJ Heritage
That is very true. It also shows in the tiniest of nature's eyes. The shades are always fascinating to say the least, and your words express the theme and imagery very well.
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Thanks for sharing and have a wonderful evening.
God blessings.
RJ
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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That is very true. It also shows in the tiniest of nature's eyes. The shades are always fascinating to say the least, and your words express the theme and imagery very well.
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Thanks for sharing and have a wonderful evening.
God blessings.
RJ
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Mrs. KT
Exquisite, Gypsy.
Truly, exquisite in form and message.
I am posting a piece on Sunday about my nephew's recent suicide, and your Haiku truly resonates with me.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Exquisite, Gypsy.
Truly, exquisite in form and message.
I am posting a piece on Sunday about my nephew's recent suicide, and your Haiku truly resonates with me.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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I'm sorry about your nephew, I know how it feels.
Thank you very much, Diana
Gypsy hugs
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So very tragic, Gypsy.
Still trying to process it all...
Much appreciation,
diane
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This presentation and poem are absolutely gorgeous. I have stared at it and reread it three times. For some reason it hits me as something every special. Thank you.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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This presentation and poem are absolutely gorgeous. I have stared at it and reread it three times. For some reason it hits me as something every special. Thank you.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much Barbara. You are the second to mention of being touched deep by this one.
Gypsy hugs
