Goodbye
My true goodbye to an old friend and an almost love.2 total reviews
Comment from Mark Jackson
That was good I enjoyed reading it. It is a shame that it is anonymous because I feel I want to read more. Perhaps I will remember. 5 stars no 6's left so not an option.
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That was good I enjoyed reading it. It is a shame that it is anonymous because I feel I want to read more. Perhaps I will remember. 5 stars no 6's left so not an option.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I can sorta see how love would bite as written. Now do I say, "Sorry" or leave it be for though I feel your pain. let it be buried once and for all. Maybe authoring the experience will put it to bed.
Suggestions; Your font is uncomfortably too small and I think it would read better if you eliminate so much space between the lines. I got tired continuously scrolling
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I can sorta see how love would bite as written. Now do I say, "Sorry" or leave it be for though I feel your pain. let it be buried once and for all. Maybe authoring the experience will put it to bed.
Suggestions; Your font is uncomfortably too small and I think it would read better if you eliminate so much space between the lines. I got tired continuously scrolling
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024