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You are Painting my Portrait

A short poem

12 total reviews 
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I think we have more command over our life than we realise Patricia, but here you are allowing the portrait to be painted whilst you sit and watch, a unique post, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
    With gratitude in my heart, I wish to thank you very much for very very nice review
Comment from gansach
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This is short and sweet and expresses your feelings well. There are reasons for all that befalls us, even though we may not understand them at the time, but each occurrence shapes our lives and path as the higher power leads us to where we're meant to go and what to be. Lovely effort and illustration. Best wishes!

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much for a lovely review is appreciated always.
Comment from royowen
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The wonderful thing about God is that we are His workmanship, to Him we have been perfected in Christ, and we His masterpiece, you are His masterpiece, well dine, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
    When you leave nice review like this, it opens a space in my heart that speaks joy. Thank you so so much.
reply by royowen on 26-Apr-2024
    Most welcome Pat
Comment from Wendy G
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A lovely post, Patricia - and one that we all need to keep in mind. The painting of our lives is not yet finished, and some darker tones are needed to set off the lighter tones. Well done.
Wendy

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
    Gratitude in my heart and wish thank you for a very nice review
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hi Pat, we are all made in the image of God, but some of us need more a little work before we become the master piece that He has designed.
Well done. Xo. M

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
    I am always grateful to get such nice reviews. Thank you so thank
Comment from jim vecchio
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Even the most terrible and heartbreaking of times, God can and will transform to our good. There is nothing we can go through that He is not familiar with, and He is able to grant us victory over circumstnces.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
    I am always grateful for such a nice review this
reply by jim vecchio on 26-Apr-2024
    Always enjoy reading your words.
Comment from GoWiSt
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"You are Painting my Portrait" I am? Well, I'm glad to--no charge.
"the many difficult struggles and strive" Change 'strive' (a verb) to 'strife' (a noun--which rhymes better with life).
Good rhymes with me/be.
Good metaphoric imagery of God brushing your life into whatever He has planned it to be.



 Comment Written 25-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
    Thank you for taking the time to review my work and leaving such anice.comment.
Comment from jessizero
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I loved your rhymes in this poem, and I loved those last two lines. God is still working on all of us, as the song says. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
    Thank you for taking the time to my work and leaving such a nice comment. Thank you.
Comment from fm wright
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A six star poem, if I had any more to give out. I love the title. It is wonderfully creative. The photo and words go so well together. I also very much like your author's notes. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
    Thank you for stopping by my work and they make such a nice comment.
reply by fm wright on 26-Apr-2024
    It was truly a work of art.
Comment from RJ Heritage
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Well, tha is a nice way to look at your life. I guess God is the Master painter, if we let Him. And it makes so much more sense to let Him. He is the one that gives color to our lives.
Have a great evening, and a great night.
God blessings.
RJ

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
    Most grateful to get such nice comments, sis thank you so much.