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to befriend the Godhead

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Comment from s.m.kirby
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This is a good 20 syllable poem. nicely done. What a delight it is to seek after the Lord. What an advantage we have in him. I hope you have a wonderful day.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2024

Comment from shelley kaye
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good use of the 20 syllables for a deep meaning in this little poetic thought...
syllable count is correct
and this has a smooth flow and thought-provoking image

thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2024