Where are you?
A 5-7-5 Poem11 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Where Are You?, has the proper formatting and notes that when the ideas dry up, the man with the blindfold and cigarette may have to pass from static cling.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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This 5-7-5, Where Are You?, has the proper formatting and notes that when the ideas dry up, the man with the blindfold and cigarette may have to pass from static cling.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made me smile with this post, perhaps you should try encouragement rather than the a shotgun! Ha ha ha, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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You made me smile with this post, perhaps you should try encouragement rather than the a shotgun! Ha ha ha, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Dolly, glad you could smile at my words, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Kahpot, this is a poem that many of us can/will related to. My muse abandoned me years ago. Thus, I'm now writing stories vs. poetry, but I keep hoping s/he will return.
I enjoyed reading your poem. Nice play on the word "execute."
A fun poem. Well done. As this is a contest entry, I wish you
good luck. Margaret
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Hi Kahpot, this is a poem that many of us can/will related to. My muse abandoned me years ago. Thus, I'm now writing stories vs. poetry, but I keep hoping s/he will return.
I enjoyed reading your poem. Nice play on the word "execute."
A fun poem. Well done. As this is a contest entry, I wish you
good luck. Margaret
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Magaret, sometimes our muse just goes walkabout, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This humorous poem has reference to a muse who is seriously missing in action, apparently. Blank looks or blank shots or maybe blank pieces of paper seem to be the result of trying to get the foolish muse back. Some days we all draw a blank. Good luck in that contest.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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This humorous poem has reference to a muse who is seriously missing in action, apparently. Blank looks or blank shots or maybe blank pieces of paper seem to be the result of trying to get the foolish muse back. Some days we all draw a blank. Good luck in that contest.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hahaha... poor muse or poor writer. It's horrible when the muse skips out of town. I had writer's block for two years when I was sick.
I would change the font color, it's hard to read.
Well done! Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Hahaha... poor muse or poor writer. It's horrible when the muse skips out of town. I had writer's block for two years when I was sick.
I would change the font color, it's hard to read.
Well done! Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Gypsy, I needed to have a laugh, I have changed the font, many thanks, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Lovely picture. Concise and tailored poem. I may be missing in action for a while. I am moving to Plano, Texas to be near my three sisters, I have to pack stuff up. Karen
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Lovely picture. Concise and tailored poem. I may be missing in action for a while. I am moving to Plano, Texas to be near my three sisters, I have to pack stuff up. Karen
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Karen, have a great move, and travel safe, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Thanks for the good wishes. Karen
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very good poem for the contest that I wish you a very best in the contest and you have a pleasant day and a good weekend. This would have been better. Had you put the text in maybe block so it shows up for those people like me who have vision problems. Patricia .
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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This is a very good poem for the contest that I wish you a very best in the contest and you have a pleasant day and a good weekend. This would have been better. Had you put the text in maybe block so it shows up for those people like me who have vision problems. Patricia .
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Patricia, I did change the font to black, (sorry about that)
as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Changing the fonts helped a very great deal.
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. I enjoyed your humorous poem about the wayward muse. I think there is some word play with only shooting "blanks" as the narrator looks at his blank page. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Lol. I enjoyed your humorous poem about the wayward muse. I think there is some word play with only shooting "blanks" as the narrator looks at his blank page. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from royowen
Heh heh, they can be incredibly stubborn, Kahpot, This is a terrific entry in this wonderful entry in this contest, although your must seems to be very active my friend, good job, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Heh heh, they can be incredibly stubborn, Kahpot, This is a terrific entry in this wonderful entry in this contest, although your must seems to be very active my friend, good job, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Roy, glad you found my humor, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Mark Jackson
I find it funny that your last line is longer than your middle although your middle line has more syllables. It is also strange that though has one syllable but only has two. A strange thing language. Don't shoot your muse or you'll end up with nothing but words to amuse yourself with.
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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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I find it funny that your last line is longer than your middle although your middle line has more syllables. It is also strange that though has one syllable but only has two. A strange thing language. Don't shoot your muse or you'll end up with nothing but words to amuse yourself with.
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Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you mark, yes, words can be difficult, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
