My Family is The Best
They are the best.6 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Raul
This is a nice short vignette about how close your family is. It is good to see such a loving family.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Hi Raul
This is a nice short vignette about how close your family is. It is good to see such a loving family.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you and the same to you, too!
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You're welcome and thanks.
Joan
Comment from nomi338
You are very fortunate. Many of my family members have passed away all of my grand parents, my mom and dad, and my oldest daughter as well. I stll have some family members still alive and I treasure them greatly.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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You are very fortunate. Many of my family members have passed away all of my grand parents, my mom and dad, and my oldest daughter as well. I stll have some family members still alive and I treasure them greatly.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is a very proud and grateful tribute to your family, Raul! Your very short piece reads without any noted errors and I commend you for it! Thanks for sharing. Debbie
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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This is a very proud and grateful tribute to your family, Raul! Your very short piece reads without any noted errors and I commend you for it! Thanks for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I liked reading this non-fiction paragraph about what family means to you. I think you did a good job with a short number of words.
Two suggestions:
I am happy and I have a healthy relationship with my family.
I would add a comma after the word 'happy' to separate the two independent clauses.
They care about me and I care about them too.
I would add a comma after the word 'me' in this sentence to separate the two independent clauses. And I would add a comma after the word 'them' as well.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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I liked reading this non-fiction paragraph about what family means to you. I think you did a good job with a short number of words.
Two suggestions:
I am happy and I have a healthy relationship with my family.
I would add a comma after the word 'happy' to separate the two independent clauses.
They care about me and I care about them too.
I would add a comma after the word 'me' in this sentence to separate the two independent clauses. And I would add a comma after the word 'them' as well.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Typos fixed. Thank you for your help and review!
Comment from jim vecchio
Never forget what a blessing your family is. Always remember to say "I Love You!" Time goes by so fast. Fortunately, you'll have many wonderful memories for the future.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Never forget what a blessing your family is. Always remember to say "I Love You!" Time goes by so fast. Fortunately, you'll have many wonderful memories for the future.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you!
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You're welcome!
Comment from Douglas Goff
There is nothing quite like family. You should always keep them first in your heart.
I like that you are maintaining the relationship well. It is important.
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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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There is nothing quite like family. You should always keep them first in your heart.
I like that you are maintaining the relationship well. It is important.
D
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you!
