Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

Hi Dovey Congratulations and a lovely poem to welcome your little girl Evelyn Grace a sweetie too. It is always nice to write about our children an our hearts are always on our sleeve Enjoy all the little delights
Cheers Chris

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024

Thank you, Chris!
She is our most recent granddaughter, born 2 months ago. Her and her mom live with us so we are having so much fun!
Kim

Comment from nancyjam

Excellent

First of all, Congratulations on your baby girl. She's beautiful.
i can certainly understand how difficult it must be, trying to write a poem when you are distracted by this little angel. She also is an inspiration this time. Great rhyme and meter and lovely images.
Nancy

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024

Hi Nancy!
Thank you for a lovely review.
Kim

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very well written poem about your precious new family member. I enjoyed listening to it and it flows very well. What it is. Read aloud your presentation is beautiful. Congratulations on the new baby. Patricia .

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024

Thank you, Patricia!
We are blessed with a beautiful granddaughter who lives with us and her mom.
Kim

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

One grandma definitely understands another! And that tight grip is amazing about a newborn. They have that special recent touch by the Lord and we're drawn to them! I especially liked "Her scent - vanilla happiness -"

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024

Hi Helen!
We are so blessed! Nichole always says that she reminds her of Vanilla happiness, so I had to include it!
Kim

Comment from Bryce 1

Exceptional

I can't help but love this one. I really feel the love you have for that baby girl. Truly touching and well put together. I suppose it is rare for me to connect with a poem, especially one with a subject such as this but this time I was hit. Thank you for this

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024

Thank you so much, Bryce! I am honored by your exceptional review and rating!
Kim

Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

I liked reading this poem. I have only tried a kyrielle once or twice. Little babies are sure great sources of inspiration, even if they are completely unaware of it.
The only teensy suggestion I have is to take the comma out after 'written' in the next to last line.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024

Thank you so much for the review and great suggestion!
Kim