Outer Banks, North Carolina
Sunset at Outer Banks last summer10 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, sunsets are a reminder that God is in charge. I enjoyed reading this contest entry. Your presentation is beautiful. Thank you for sharing this entry with us and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Yes, sunsets are a reminder that God is in charge. I enjoyed reading this contest entry. Your presentation is beautiful. Thank you for sharing this entry with us and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 11-May-2024
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Thank you so much for this nice review.
Comment from gansach
Beautiful color scheme and accompanying picture that perfectly illustrates your poem. Many haiku seem a bit awkward when reading them, but yours flows naturally. A lovely thought and so true, sunsets are masterpieces of color with God's creative touch. Excellent! Best wishes!
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Beautiful color scheme and accompanying picture that perfectly illustrates your poem. Many haiku seem a bit awkward when reading them, but yours flows naturally. A lovely thought and so true, sunsets are masterpieces of color with God's creative touch. Excellent! Best wishes!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for your great review.
Comment from GoWiSt
Wow! Very nice, serene scene in that complementary picture art.
Nicely met the line and sylable count requirements of this 5-7-5 poem contest.
Indeed, indeed, we see the fashioning hands of God in every atmosphere and light of dusk, with none ever exactlly the same as another. God's infinite brush strokes.
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Wow! Very nice, serene scene in that complementary picture art.
Nicely met the line and sylable count requirements of this 5-7-5 poem contest.
Indeed, indeed, we see the fashioning hands of God in every atmosphere and light of dusk, with none ever exactlly the same as another. God's infinite brush strokes.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for your great review
Comment from Ginda Simpson
As an artist and a spiritual being, I see every sunset as a masterpiece of God. So needless to say, I love your Haiku and how you have used your talent to illustrate and reflect on God's creation. Beautiful Haiku.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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As an artist and a spiritual being, I see every sunset as a masterpiece of God. So needless to say, I love your Haiku and how you have used your talent to illustrate and reflect on God's creation. Beautiful Haiku.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you do much for your great review!
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Yes, it is a vibrant sunset. It seems to blossom into a cloud formation that explodes into the sky full-blown. I love the use of the last line such as haiku would do with its sartori saying that it is designed creation. Whether one believes in a designed creation theory or not there is no doubt about the beautiful beach at Outer Banks, North Carolina.
Thanks for sharing this lovely poem.
Jesse
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Yes, it is a vibrant sunset. It seems to blossom into a cloud formation that explodes into the sky full-blown. I love the use of the last line such as haiku would do with its sartori saying that it is designed creation. Whether one believes in a designed creation theory or not there is no doubt about the beautiful beach at Outer Banks, North Carolina.
Thanks for sharing this lovely poem.
Jesse
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much Jesse for your nice review.
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You're welcome, Brenda.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Your beautiful 575 poem is excellent for the challenge. You use correct syllable counts, vivid descriptions and imagery, to convey the Goodness of God's Creation. Thank you for sharing this.
Best wishes
Alex
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Your beautiful 575 poem is excellent for the challenge. You use correct syllable counts, vivid descriptions and imagery, to convey the Goodness of God's Creation. Thank you for sharing this.
Best wishes
Alex
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for your nice review
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You're welcome.
Comment from Bryce 1
This feels like a sentence uttered from the mouth of someone who got a lot out of that day's sermon. I love the picture chosen as well. This life and the beauty I witness is sometimes overwhelming. I am unable to properly identify where or why any of this is here. Sometimes, I can, but how fleeting! Thank you for this.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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This feels like a sentence uttered from the mouth of someone who got a lot out of that day's sermon. I love the picture chosen as well. This life and the beauty I witness is sometimes overwhelming. I am unable to properly identify where or why any of this is here. Sometimes, I can, but how fleeting! Thank you for this.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for nice your review
Comment from nancyjam
I enjoyed your beautifully worded 5-7-5. I have always believed the beauties of nature are God's gift to mankind.
I see that truth in your poem. Best of luck in the contest.
Nancy
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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I enjoyed your beautifully worded 5-7-5. I have always believed the beauties of nature are God's gift to mankind.
I see that truth in your poem. Best of luck in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for your nice review
Comment from Carol Clark2
What a beautiful picture! I like the reflection of the sky in the water. We had a similar sky over NW Ohio a few days ago. Your syllable counts are perfect, and the message of your poem is lovely. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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What a beautiful picture! I like the reflection of the sky in the water. We had a similar sky over NW Ohio a few days ago. Your syllable counts are perfect, and the message of your poem is lovely. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your good review
Comment from Douglas Goff
The Outer Banks are quite beautiful! I remember the sunsets well. I enjoyed my stint as a US Marine in the Carolinas. I would like to return one day.
Great memories came back from your poem Thanks!
Good luck in the competition!
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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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The Outer Banks are quite beautiful! I remember the sunsets well. I enjoyed my stint as a US Marine in the Carolinas. I would like to return one day.
Great memories came back from your poem Thanks!
Good luck in the competition!
D
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your nice review
