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Something's Wrong

the perfect storm

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Comment from Brandi Radaker
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This was beautifully written and a very true and vibrant problem that many people agree with. You do a great job displaying the passion behind this poem. Good luck.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Brandi
Comment from jessizero
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This is definitely a thought-provoking work you have penned. I admire that you quoted Aerosmith, and I loved the last bit "The fault lives in the mirror." Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Jessi