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echoes remain

6 Word Poetry

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I have decided I need to become a fan because it seems I read a lot of your postings and have enjoyed everyone. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
    Thank you very much, so kind.
Comment from Douglas Goff
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Nice manipulation, Mark. I enjoyed this piece of work, although now I have to write one-hundred and fifty characters worth of review for six words.

Did I mention that I liked this poem?
D

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
    lol thanks
Comment from gansach
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Excellent effort--your image created is wonderful. The font and style as well as the alliteration adds to the atmosphere of the poem. Very good creative effort for the competition. Best wishes!

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
    Thank you very much.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
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Wow, Mark, I am impressed with your manipulation of the artwork where you placed the text of the poem inside and on top of the photograph you took. That is amazing! Plus, you made a grand statement that we all can relate to and develop in our minds into something more beautiful and extreme than previously imagined.
Jesse

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
    I used Microsoft Paint to do most of it. I stopped using Photoshop because they expect you to pay a subscription. Thank you.
reply by Jesse James Doty on 24-Apr-2024
    If it is free then Microsoft Paint sounds like a dream come true.
    Good ideas come to life.
    You're welcome, Mark.
    Jesse
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the 6 Word Poetry Contest. I really like this poem with it's triple use of the words beginning with E and R in all three lines. Very nice message in only six words. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
    Thank you
Comment from Begin Again
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My goodness...you certainly packed a lot into those six words and the creativity in your art work is awesome as well. Memories - good and bad - will resonate in our minds for a very long time.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
    Thank you so very much!
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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Six words is tough, but I like how you've alternated e-words and r-words here and your own creative art in the presentation. You took the rules of a 6-word poem and put something thoughtful into it.

Probably many individual interpretations here; for me, it says that that every intense moment in our lives remains in memories that we retain throughout our lives.

Good luck in this contest, Mark. You've given the judges more than usual to contemplate.

xo
Pam

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
    Thank you very much.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Yes we remember those special moments from the past with great fondness and recalling those memories helps us relive the joy we felt back then, I can identify with your words Mark, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
    Tank you
Comment from Brenda Strauser
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This is an interesting poem. It
Is well written. Does this have to do with the rapture in the Bible? A poem with 6 words is hard to do. You do a good job with it.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
    Thank you
Comment from Val Crisson
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This is very very good. These itty bitty poems are so difficult, but you managed to get a very good point across. I love your creative spirit here by creating your own image. Yes, it's very true, that every memory of importance of rapture remains. Nice alliteration.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
    Thank you