Sprinkle of Joy
A sweet poem about spreading joy and happiness.4 total reviews
Comment from patricia dillon
Sugar is not actually very good for you, but your image of your confection is very enticing, and would make me forget about my teeth for a moment. I see it was generated by AI.
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Sugar is not actually very good for you, but your image of your confection is very enticing, and would make me forget about my teeth for a moment. I see it was generated by AI.
Comment Written 19-May-2024
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Well, if this doesn't win I will be shocked. This is great. Let me recommend Google, Bing, and Pinterest for free pictures. Just mention them in author's notes.
Spoiler alert: I get lost on Pinterest sometimes looking at laughing babies. Never fails to lift my spirits. Karen
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Well, if this doesn't win I will be shocked. This is great. Let me recommend Google, Bing, and Pinterest for free pictures. Just mention them in author's notes.
Spoiler alert: I get lost on Pinterest sometimes looking at laughing babies. Never fails to lift my spirits. Karen
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
Comment from Julie Helms
I am scratching my head as to why fanstory put a "may have mature content" warning on this. Unless you mean this in a whole different way than I read it! Ha ha.
A nicely described Fantasy cake, that exactly fits the prompt for the contest. Best of luck!
Julie
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I am scratching my head as to why fanstory put a "may have mature content" warning on this. Unless you mean this in a whole different way than I read it! Ha ha.
A nicely described Fantasy cake, that exactly fits the prompt for the contest. Best of luck!
Julie
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
Comment from Mark Jackson
I looked at this and I even began to write a nonsense rhyme about a cake. I got halfway through before looking at the contest rules in full. It was then I saw it had to be a walking cake (yours is mine wasn't) and also it had to have a set rhyming scheme. This was ABC/ABC. Meaning line one has to rhyme with line four; line two has to rhyme with line five; etc. You might fall foul of this. A good stand a lone poem nothing wrong with your writing.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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I looked at this and I even began to write a nonsense rhyme about a cake. I got halfway through before looking at the contest rules in full. It was then I saw it had to be a walking cake (yours is mine wasn't) and also it had to have a set rhyming scheme. This was ABC/ABC. Meaning line one has to rhyme with line four; line two has to rhyme with line five; etc. You might fall foul of this. A good stand a lone poem nothing wrong with your writing.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Shoot. I must of overlooked that when I read the rules. Thank you for bringing that to my attention and thank you for your kind review.
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I did and then gave up when I saw it, it felt to contrived.
