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Common Yet Precious

A wildflower haiku

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Comment from kahpot
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I really like the way you have combined two very important aspects of nature in this wonderful haiku, everything has a pupose, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024

Comment from lyenochka
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A lovely wildflower haiku! Yes, even these wildflowers are precious, especially if it's a favorite of a regal creature like the monarch butterfly. Great picture with such magnification to help us appreciate all the beauty!

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024

Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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How interesting. I didn't know this. Monarch butterflies are so pretty. You used excellent descriptions and the photo works well to support your words. I enjoyed reviewing.

Best wishes

Alex

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2024

Comment from RodG
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My wife has planted milkweed to attract monarch butterflies and they often come to our yard. Your poem suggests saturating the garden with such. Attracting Themis indeed a worthy cause. Rod

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2024

Comment from patcelaw
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This is very beautifully worded and a lovely presentation. I enjoyed very much listening to it and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May you have a wonderful week. Patricia .

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
    Thank you! Glad you enjoyed this one.
Comment from Mrs. KT
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So very beautiful, June!
Your haiku is beautiful as well!
How I love monarchs and milkweed!
And you've captured their essence very well!

Thank you for sharing!
diane

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
    Thank you! I love monarchs and all that spring brings.
Comment from nancyjam
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I enjoyed reading your lovely Haiku about the miracles in nature. What may seem insignificant to us can mean life to the smallest creatures.
It could also be a metaphor for humanity too.
Lovely .
Nancy

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
    Thank you! I love monarchs and all that spring brings.
Comment from jessizero
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I enjoyed this brief look into nature. I like your descriptions, but I really loved the first line, "common, yet precious." I love that something can be both. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
    Thank you! I love monarchs and all that spring brings.