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Comment from Dr. Nad
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Sis, thank you for sharing with us concerning the loss of Sally's brother. Your birthday celebrations and bye-bye commemorations are a service to the community that no one else could or would do thanks again. Great job.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
    Dan, thanks for the kindest review and caring words for this poem for Sally.
    She is very dear to me so they are truly appreciated. Thanks for the six stars, bro, and I hope you know how much I appreciate you. Love, Debi
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
    Dan, thanks for the kindest review and caring words for this poem for Sally.
    She is very dear to me so they are truly appreciated. Thanks for the six stars, bro, and I hope you know how much I appreciate you. Love, Debi
reply by Dr. Nad on 04-May-2024
    You're most welcome!
reply by Dr. Nad on 04-May-2024
    You're most welcome!
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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Once again you give us information that is very valuable because now we can reach out to Sally and send our condolences. You are always so gentle with your information too. Thank you.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 02-May-2024
    OMGosh Liz, I know I answered this one a long time ago but it must not have saved. I have had that happen a lot. Thanks yo for the kind words for Sally';
    Thanks so much again. Love ya lots. Debi
reply by Liz O'Neill on 02-May-2024
    I have so many people who could be thanking me and telling me what a great job I did reviewing them that I have no idea whether they're getting to me on time or not so never worry with me.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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Thank you for being mindful of other writers' hard life events. Sending positive thoughts/prayers her way now. Favorite line in this poem:

And her sight is more vivid in her spirit, heart and mind
Thank you for posting.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
    Hey Sweetie, thanks for the very lovely review and comments for Sally's loss of her big brother. It is sad indeed! Thank you for always being so kind whenever somebody is in need of compassion. You are so sweet and I thank you again. Love, Debi
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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This is so sad for Sally and you have written a beautiful poem for the occasion. Her father and all her brothers have gone on before the girls, so they know who is waiting for them on the other side. There is joy in that as well as sorrow. You always make poem that are so personal and memorable.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
    Hey Sweetie, thanks for the very lovely review and comments for Sally's loss of her big brother. It is sad indeed! Thank you for always being so kind whenever somebody is in need of compassion. You are so kind and I thank you again. Love, Debi
Comment from gansach
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This is a lovely request and tribute for Sally and her sad loss. It has kind and gentle words that tell us a bit about her, express your compassion for her, and ask that others offer their condolences. The rhythm and flow creates a soft, comforting motion. Very nice!

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
    Hi gansach, thanks for the very lovely review and comments for Sally's loss of her big brother. It is sad indeed! Sally will appreciate everything people say to help her right now. You are so kind and I thank you again.
    Love, Debi
Comment from dragonpoet
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HI Debi,
Thanks for letting us know about Sally's loss. She and her family will be in my prays.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy the rest of your week
Joan

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
    Thanks Joan, for the very lovely review and comments for Sally's loss of her big brother. It is sad indeed! Sally will appreciate everything people say to help her right now. You are so kind and I thank you again.
    Love, Debi
reply by dragonpoet on 25-Apr-2024
    You're very welcome, Debi.
    Joan
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I completely understand what Sally is going through, and feel so sad for her. This is a beautiful poem, Debi, you always find the right words to help through such times. I'm sure Sal will treasure this poem, my friend. Well done! Love and hugs, Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
    Hi Sandra, I know this was probably hard for you to read with it being not that long since your brother passed. I wish I could tell you that it gets better soon, but for me it still is hard.

    And thanks for the very lovely review and comments for Sally's loss of her big brother. It is sad indeed! Sally will appreciate everything people say to help her right now. You are so kind and I thank you again.
    Love, Debi
Comment from Begin Again
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As always, the beautiful lady with the gigantic heart has wrote a poem to tell all of us that Sally needs our love and support. I have already extended my condolences but will do it again because when grieving, its nice to have that hand reaching out to hold yours.

My thoughts and prayers are with Sally and her family as always.
Hugs, Carol

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
    Hi Carol, thank you for the loveliest words for me. That was so sweet of you to say such nice things. And thanks for the very lovely review and comments for Sally's loss of her big brother. It is sad indeed! Sally will appreciate everything people say to help her right now. You are so kind and I thank you again.
    Love, Debi
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Lovely artwork and nice presentation, Debi.
-I am sorry to hear about Sally's loss.
-You wrote a lovely tribute for her.
-Her brother sounds like very special person
and they had a special bond.
-It is never easy losing a loved one but
eventually the cherished memories will
offer comfort as she thinks of those.
-She also has a supportive family, and
that also makes a big difference.
-A lovely conclusion for your tribute, as well.
-Thanks for sharing it, and condolences
go out to Sally: Thoughts are with you
during this difficult time.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
    As always Pam. You are always so sweet and I thank you for the very lovely review and comments for Sally's loss of her big brother. It is sad indeed! Sally will appreciate everything people say to help her right now. You are so kind and I thank you again.
    Love, Debi
reply by Pam (respa) on 25-Apr-2024
    You are very welcome, Debi. I appreciate your reply and writing the tribute for Sally.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
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Debi, thank you so very much for sharing this news of Sally's loss so that we can reach out to her. I believe our Fanstory family is about more than just writing. It is about connecting. God bless you.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
    Ginda, you are such a sweetheart and I thank you so very much for your lovely review and comments. Sally will find comfort in your sweet words too. Thank you for the six stars too my very dear friend.
    Love, Debi